2017年3月托福寫作真題回憶及范文賞析(二)

　　綜合

　　閱讀：保護瀕危鳥類Hermit Ibis 很困難，因為:

　　1. habitat destruction 生存環(huán)境的破壞，大多由于人的占用導(dǎo)致。

　　2. 附近捕食者( 比如禿鷹和烏鴉)對幼鳥和蛋的攻擊. Eggs and juvenile are vulnerable to the predators, which, however, cannot be killed because they are also important to ecosystem.

　　3. 保護瀕危物種通常科學(xué)家會raise them in captivity 然后release into the wild, 但是Hermit Ibis 是遷徙類動物，它們是從父母那里學(xué)習(xí)how and where to migrate ， 如果人工飼養(yǎng)然后放回大自然，它們無法生存。

　　聽力：問題可以解決

　　1. hermit ibis 可以在很多地方筑巢，人工搭建的棲息地，比如建筑物的外墻。這個不是問題。

　　2. 雖然eggs and juvenile are vulnerable ，但是它們的天敵都比較膽小，只要在eggs and uvenile 成年之前人類通過吹哨子趕走天敵， Hermit Ibis 成年后生活就沒有問題了。

　　3. 人類也可以教給年幼的hermit ibis 如何遷徙，比如pilot 帶著年幼的hermit ibis 隨著它們遷徙的路線飛行，它們也可以學(xué)會如何遷徙，放回大自然后它們的生存就不會有任何問題。

　　Sample Answer:

　　Contrary to the belief in the passage that it is difficult to protect hermit ibis, the professor asserts a diverse perception.

　　To begin with, the professor argues that hermit ibis actually can build nest everywhere. For example, the wall of buildings is perfectly suitable for them to build nest. Habitat destruction won?t be a problem to prevent scientists from protecting hermit ibis. This directly challenges the first idea in the reading that like many other endangered species, it is difficult to protect hermit ibis because of the habitat destruction.

　　Then, the author of the passage points out eggs and juveniles are vulnerable to the predators, which, however, are not supposed be killed because they are also important to ecosystem. However, their predators actually are coward species. People can easily blow whistles to scare away the predators during the period in which they are vulnerable. When they grow up to adults, there will be nothing to be worried about anymore. Again, this contradicts what the reading passage says about the same issue.

　　Finally, the professor points out that human can also teach young hermit ibis how to migrate. For example, pilots can flight along hermit ibis? migratory route thus young hermit ibis that is raised in captivity will follow this route and become capable of migrating just like their peers living in the wild. Yet, the reading is of the opposite view that hermit ibis raised in captivity by scientists don?t have the chance to learn how and where to migrate from their parents.(253 words)

　　獨立

　　Do you agree or disagree: it?s better to relax through watching a film and reading a book han doing physical exercises?

　　解題思路：

　　同意該觀點：

　　1. 有趣的電影情節(jié)會帶來樂趣。

　　2. 看書會讓心情非常平靜和愉悅。

　　體育運動有時候很無聊而且會容易讓人疲憊。

　　Sample Answer:

　　Everyone in the society is seeking for a way to release his or her pressure derived from continuous study or work, but what is the key factor of getting completely relaxed? There are two choices – the first one is to sit themselves to a comfortable couch, watching movies and reading books while the other is to go out and do physical exercises. Although someone tends to choose the first approach, I definitely agree that doing physical exercise is a better choice for those who want to relax themselves.

　　The first and foremost advantage of doing physical exercise is that it helps people stretch themselves and get recovered from anchylosis. People often feel stressed out because they sit still working or studying for 6 or more hours every day. Despite the difficulties caused by some sophisticated problems they need to deal with, sitting still for long is also one of the reasons that cause people?s intense pressure that is harmful to their health. In this case, doing exercise is a superb way to help them get relaxed. Actually, doing some sports that involve the whole body?s movement is the best, such as playing basketball, badminton. Jogging is also a good choice. On the contrary, watching a movie or reading a book still requires people to sit, which might worsen the situation instead.

　　To better relax ourselves, we must free ourselves from psychology stress. Doing exercise has two benefits in helping us achieve this goal. On the one hand, doing physical exercise facilitates the exudation of dopamine, which is a natural chemical our body secretes that makes us feel happy and relaxed. On the other hand, doing physical exercise generally brings us into contact with outside world. For example, when we jog in a park, the beautiful scenery there often refreshes our mind and takes us to a stress-free world. Besides, when we do some team sports, we communicate with our partners, sharing feelings and worries with them. They not only will cheer us up by saying some nice words but also may provide some suggestions for solving the problems we have. Clearly, we will feel much better after playing sports with them.

　　While some one may claim that we cannot ignore the importance of watching movies and reading books to relaxing ourselves since watching movies or reading books offer us greater chances to get away from the reality. Anyway, I admit that we can sometimes laugh by watching a comedy or enjoy the graceful description about pastoral country life thereby having an immersed sense. However, watching movies or reading books also requires us to stare at the screen or the book for long time, how can we have a good relaxation we still need to overfatigue our eyes? So, watching movies or reading books can be taken as good pastime when we want to spend weekends or holidays alone. And we should do physical exercise if we want to relax ourselves.

　　All in all, doing physical exercise is a superb way if we want to relax ourselves. It provides us with great opportunity to stretch ourselves and feel happy. (518 words)