Describe a person who just moved home
You should say:
Where and when the person moved?
How you know him/her?
What he/she brought with him/her?
How he/she felt about the new home?
高分參考:
1.I'd like to talk about a friend who moved into his new apartment not so long ago.The neighborhood is desirable.It has a friendly environment and convenient public transportation.Those trendy bars,restaurants are just a few steps away.my friend spent a lot of time and effort on the renovation of the apartment.Now,it’s become a sweet home.
2.The person who moved home is my best friend.We're about the same age.He's from a small city,which is located in the southern china.He's a nice person,who's independent,hard-working,and open-minded.We got along very well.That day,I was there to give him a hand.
3.He called a moving company.He just took some furniture,and some personal belongings,like:his clothes,favorite music albums,etc.After arriving at his new home,we did some cleaning.At night,we held a house warming party .We invited some of his new neighbors over.We treated them with some take-outs.Anyway,we had a good time.
4.As to how he felt about his new place.Well,he’s definitely very excited.It seems like life's treating him very well.Once,over the phone,he told me that he got along with his new neighbors very well.Today,he’s already fitted into the new living environment.I'm glad to know that he’s satisfied with his new life.
高分語料學習:
1.I ‘d like to talk about a friend who moved into his new apartment not so long ago:(高分開頭,不解釋了)
2.the neighborhood is desirable:(desirable經(jīng)常被用在歐美的房屋買賣上, 用來形容特別受歡迎的小區(qū))
3.it has a friendly environment and convenient public transportation:社區(qū)擁有良好的環(huán)境還有便捷的公共交通。
4.those trendy bars , restaurants are just a few steps away:那些時尚的酒吧,餐館就在幾步之外。
5. spent a lot of time and effort on the renovation of the apartment:(朋友)花了很多時間在房子的裝修上。
6.the person who moved home is my best friend:(這是一個得分技巧的體現(xiàn), 不但從句能帶來更高的分數(shù), 而且可以提示考官我已經(jīng)講到第三個問題了)
7.we’re about the same age:我們年齡相仿。
8.he’s from a small city ,which is located in the southern china:(注意看細節(jié),從句有額外的加分)他來自于中國南部的一個小城市。
9.he’s a nice person , independent, hard-working , and open-minded:(這又是一個在考試中有心計的體現(xiàn),口語考試中得分講究的是細節(jié),既然問的是人, 那對于那個人細節(jié)的描述當然有的分,相關(guān)詞匯!)
10.give him a hand: (習語)幫某人一把。
11.moving company:搬家公司
12.personal belongings:個人所有物
13.after arriving at his new home ,we did some cleaning:(非謂語的正確使用,體現(xiàn)語法的技巧)在我們達到他的新家之后,我們做了點簡單的清潔。
14.held a house warming party:(housewarming party 是在歐美的搬家習俗中的一部分,就類似于大家吃個飯,熱鬧熱鬧這樣)
15.as to how he felt about his new place:(連接句,承上啟下,并且可以提示考官, 我們已經(jīng)到了最后一個問題)
16.life's treating him very well:(習語)日子過的很滋潤。
17.he’s already fitted into the new living environment:他已經(jīng)融入了新的生活環(huán)境
18.he’s satisfied with his new life:他對他的新生活很滿意。