托福寫作得高分的關(guān)鍵點(diǎn)

　　要想解決中式英語(yǔ)的問題，很簡(jiǎn)單，就是要多讀地道的英語(yǔ)，而不是國(guó)內(nèi)所謂的XX級(jí)高分作文。而且在我們看一篇好的作文的時(shí)候，一定要想一想同樣的一句話，這篇作文里是怎么寫的，反過來如果是我自己我會(huì)怎么寫，這樣的比較、積累、模仿多了，我們自然也積累了很多的素材，自己自然也就會(huì)寫了。說的太抽象，拿第一段給大家舉例子。A writer can spread their imagination wide across empty paper，比如說這句話，翻譯過來中文應(yīng)該是一個(gè)作家可以在一張空白的紙上盡情的揮灑自己的想象力。如果我么自己寫，我們很有可能寫的就是A writer can write their thinking in the paper，但是這個(gè)作者將spread“傳播”代替了我們的write“書寫”，這樣的表達(dá)方式寫得更加書面化，一些就從我們小學(xué)作文的等級(jí)，跳到了高中作文。

　　然后用imagination代替了我們的“thinking”，這里完全就是imagination比“thinking”更為準(zhǔn)確。

　　然后wide across得應(yīng)用展現(xiàn)出一種動(dòng)感，不再是我們單純的用一個(gè)“in”表示在什么上面，而是用across展現(xiàn)出一種橫向運(yùn)動(dòng)的趨勢(shì)，顯得更為準(zhǔn)確和鮮活。

　　最后又用empty來修飾paper，顯示出writer的創(chuàng)造能力，能不是像我們空泛的，僅僅寫the paper。

　　上面的例子，就是很典型的，我們?cè)鯓油ㄟ^范文來提高自己的寫作能力。優(yōu)秀的文章靠的就是多聽多讀多背多說多寫多練多譯!

　　Writers

　　A writer can spread their imagination wide across empty paper， and let black-ink words fill the plain pages. Voices made by the characters in your book， words whispered by the cover that drags you into old stories…

　　As a writer there are some cons. Once you spend hours and hours in your own， imaginary ink world， like a very nerdy writer would do， you will miss hours and hours of your real life. Also， about a million books are written each year and only a few are picked up and read in public. Are your books in the million， or the few? What if people do not like your book? They’ll tell what they think of your book to every one of their friends， and the word will travel around the area. There may be a possibility that no one likes your book and it is not a success. Being a writer is risky business.

　　There are also many pros in being a writer. In your book， you can make the characters do as they’re told， break the rules and like a puppet， control and use them freely. You can stay in your story and forget all the horrible worries in this world. Write anything and， everything you want and inflict your opinion to the big ball： Planet Earth! Or even to the “spider web” on the internet! Being a writer will bring a lot of pleasure and feel fantastic.

　　The payment of a writer， average advance of the first novel is $2 thousand to $5 thousand dollars. The most money you can get for being a writer is about $800 thousand dollars. So mostly it depends on if your book is good， or if you are an advanced writer. Always fair， I guess. Some people think the payment of being a writer is too low， just chill out and enjoy the fun!

　　If you truly wish and hope to be a writer someday， you will see the pros of being one deeper than the cons. Write your dreams， write your secrets， write your planet， write everything…