托福獨立寫作模板的用法

　　1、開頭

　　Sample one(適用于有一些背景or有一個中心詞而且編得出來那個quotation的所有情況(二選一，agree or disagree，除了個別);

　　On contemporary society(一般的背景)/ With the advent of the technologically advanced society (the information explosive era(與科技有關(guān)的背景)，XX(中心詞) serves as a catalyst for our future success/ XX is synonymous with knowledge and the road to success/XX plays an essential/increasingly important role in…/XX is enjoying an increasingly high popularity among people./很簡單的一句背景 ， However， people (universities， government， citizen， society， government，) are/is invariably faced with such a question/ can’t help wondering：改寫題目1.Confucian (Yu Qiuyu， Mark Twain， William Shakespeare)， (one of) the greatest and most influential Chinese philosophers (scholars， educators， writers， thinkers， statesmen)， has insightfully commented， “___編____”I cling to an unshakeable belief that his comment gives the answer to this question：改寫題目2.

　　Among countless factors which contribute to my position are following conspicuous ones(最后一定排比結(jié)尾，且如果字數(shù)夠了這一句就不要).

　　要做的：想一句簡單的背景+編一句名言+改寫兩次題目

　　Sample two：(如果sample one的名言編不出來或者不適合編如leisure time，就用下面的)

　　On contemporary society(一般的背景)/ With the advent of the technologically advanced society (the information explosive era(與科技有關(guān)的背景))/ On account of …，XX(中心詞) serves as a catalyst for our future success/ XX is synonymous with knowledge and the road to success/XX plays an essential/increasingly important role in… /XX is enjoying an increasingly high popularity among people./ 很簡單的一句背景( 如so…that…/not only…but also). However，when it comes to the choice between AA and BB/When asked about whether改寫題目1， people get into a dilemma. According to my personality and experiences/As far as I am concerned/From my perspective， I cling to an unshakeable belief that改寫題目2.以下最后決定怎樣寫：Among countless factors which contribute to my position are following conspicuous ones(最后一定排比結(jié)尾)/AA not only…but also(2)/There are various merits AA brings about， first of all， to…; secondly， to…;and lastly…(3).

　　要做的：想一句簡單的背景+改寫兩次題目+總起(最后寫)

　　2、分點一：分層論證

　　Basic to any understanding of the benefits we can get from

　　_______ is that__________/ First and foremost，

　　On one hand_________， On the other hand_________

　　Besides/ What’s more/ In addition.

　　這一段主要說理，在分論點里可以加一些小的例子細節(jié)，重點是要用一些精華句子!

　　3、分點二：舉例論證

　　Further lending credence to my position is that____________

　　(簡單闡述/例子字不夠就多講點廢話)I can think of no better illustration than the example of(典型例子)/ A case in point is that(不是很典型)________，…..(例子見后面)

　　一句話總結(jié)例子：As a result，強調(diào)句/倒裝句/表利弊的句型/反面論證如果沒有會怎樣

　　4、讓步段：

　　Agree or disagree： Admittedly，_____，to some extent， may directly or indirectly ____ /has its undeniable detriments. For instance， _______

　　However， the valuable merits of_______ considerably overshadow the drawbacks/ on no account________./

　　二選一：Admittedly， BB also has certain merits which deserve some words here. For example， ____(字數(shù)不夠就多講點) However，BB 的缺點或AA也可以做到. Compared with AA， (which 可以總結(jié)所有優(yōu)點或針對BB的一方面， )it pales.

　　5、結(jié)尾段：

　　Therefore， due to the above mentioned reasons， which sometimes correlate with each other to form an organic whole and thus become more persuasive than any single one of them(字不夠了用)， I reinforce my stand point that 改寫題目3

　　Only via(by/through /with/when/after) ___can we__________;

　　only via(by/through /with/when/after) ___can we________;

　　and only via(by/through /with/when/after)___can we_______

　　Or It is A that...;it is A that...;and it is A that...(不好寫或顯得累贅就不要了)

　　二、 語言篇

　　1、 基本句型

　　l 因果

　　On account of/owing to/due to+ N

　　For the reason that/as/since+句子

　　It is due to____that

　　eg：It is due to his persistence and perseverance that he eventually reached his acme.(強調(diào)句)

　　derive/arise/stem from來源于

　　eg：His success derives from his persistence and perseverance.

　　ascribe A to B 歸結(jié)于

　　eg： His success can be ascribed/attributed to his persistence and perseverance

　　l 條件

　　A serves as a catalyst for B(our further success)

　　If/on condition that/provided that/as long as________

　　l 讓步

　　Despite the fact that/regardless of

　　2、 經(jīng)典句型

　　l 倒裝

　　1) Only via(by/through /with/when/after) __do/did/can we__

　　ef： Only after going to the beach of Hawaii will I know about American typical type of spending leisure time.

　　2) Hardly/Seldom/Scarcely can__

　　ef： Hardly can we imagine a world/our life without/devoid of

　　3) So +adj+主謂倒裝+that__

　　4) Not only 主謂倒裝 but also...

　　eg： Not only should education prepare children to compete

　　Not only do people care their economic needs，they but also want to meet their spiritual needs.

　　5) On no account 主謂倒裝(決不....)

　　l 強調(diào)

　　It is/was....that/who(m)....

　　l 插入語

　　1) 限定性副詞 probably/directly or indirectly/to some(a large) extent

　　2) N+，ving，+v

　　3) 同位語

　　3、經(jīng)典中的經(jīng)典

　　l 排比

　　1) It is tourism that gives me the opportunity to know the culture of this dynamic， robust and alive country.

　　2) It is computers that make our life diverse，convenient，dynamic/ vibrant， without which our life would probably pale.

　　3) A/which needs to be/In this way， A can be readily accepted， respected，appreciated and advocated.

　　4) Only via university education can we have systematic knowledge concerning arts and science.Only via university education can we know the essence of symbiosis and collaboration. And Only via university education can we meet the demands of society and make our future success inevitable.

　　l 十大副詞

　　1) Considerably

　　2) Invariably

　　3) Undoubtedly/indisputably/incontrovertibly

　　4) Increasingly

　　5) Most/exceedingly/exceptionally 格外地

　　6) Insightfully 富有見底地

　　7) Regrettably

　　8) Effectively and efficiently

　　9) Gradually and eventually

　　10) Readily

　　l 其他

　　1) It is not difficult for us to imagine that 不難想象

　　2) B makes it possible for us to have an universal access to A/A is readily available. A容易得到

　　3) In order to survive and thrive in this fiercely competitive society， people have no choice but to work and study hard.

　　4) Ruthless and relentless無形/fierce and intense competition

　　The ruthless and relentless competition imposes an unprecedented pressure on each and every individual， and therefore，there is no exaggeration to say that our innovative and inventive ability can lay a solid foundation for our future， enabling us to survive and thrive in the modern world.

　　5) Inspiration， aspiration and perspiration

　　6) Vision，passion and mission

　　7) 其他詞語見最后清單p120

　　三、論證篇

　　1、模糊論證

　　Range from...

　　舉例論證

　　l 自己的例子

　　I can think of no better illustration than the example of my own visit to Singapore. Only after going shopping on Orchard road， the main shopping district in Singapore，did I realize what "a paradise for shopping"really was. Only after roaming in the City Hall，the financial center of Singapore， did I experience the quick pace of modern life. Only after lying on the beach of Sentosa did I know about the Singaporean typical way of spending leisure time.

　　l 名人的例子(Yu Minghong，。。。)

　　l 社會的例子

　　For example， on account of the advent of the technologically advanced society， employers tend to hire people equipped with a wide range of knowledge rather than the ones with limited knowledge.

　　l 瞎編的例子

　　2、數(shù)據(jù)論證

　　I can think of no better illustration than the statistic. Experts from the Department of Sociology in Peking University pointed out that the average sleeping time an adult has everyday， compared with 8 hours in the 1970s， has decreased to 6.8 hours due to the busy work and study.

　　3、引用論證(開頭)

　　4、假想論證

　　Imagine/visualize/picture/suppose ....