雅思大作文議論文高分范文解析：文化話題

　　Young people should spend more time on cultural activities such as music and theatreand less time on sport.

　　Howfar do you agree with this statement?

　　Key words analysis

　　spend: 花費(fèi)，一般結(jié)構(gòu)式spend on 或spend in doing

　　cultural activities: 文化活動(dòng)

　　such as: 例如，常用于舉一些列舉的例子

　　theatre: 劇院，在這里指在劇院的活動(dòng)，如看戲劇

　　Argument:

　　這是屬于議論文中的argument類型，但是題目問的是howfar do you agree?此題可以從agree的角度來回答，也可以從disagree的角度回答，但是建議從兩方面進(jìn)行回答，給出它的優(yōu)缺點(diǎn)，然后再在最后進(jìn)行總結(jié)。

　　Possible reasons:

　　文化活動(dòng)的優(yōu)點(diǎn)有可以豐富人們的活動(dòng)，陶冶人們的情操等

　　運(yùn)動(dòng)可以鍛煉人們的身體，增強(qiáng)人們的體質(zhì)，可以培養(yǎng)團(tuán)隊(duì)意識(shí)

　　兩者都花時(shí)間或單花時(shí)間在一項(xiàng)上的優(yōu)缺點(diǎn)

　　Model Essay 1 – Part 1

　　Introduction

　　Some people think that young people shouldspend their free time on cultural activities like music, film and theatre.Others believe that playing sport is better for young people. In my opinion,both culture and sports are important parts of life so young people should do amixture of both.

　　Main body 1

　　Sport gives young people the chance toexercise, which is important for health reasons. Sport also teaches youngpeople about rules and teamwork. Cultural activities are good for the health ofthe mind and spirit and allow young people to be creative and experiencedifferent worlds. However, going to the theatre or learning a musicalinstrument can be expensive. Sports activities can be less expensive but can bedangerous and lead to injury.

　　Model Essay 1 – Part 2

　　Main body 2

　　In my opinion, doing only one type ofactivity - just sport or just music, for example - can be bad. Many youngpeople concentrate on one activity in order to become the best, like youngsports stars. This can put a lot of pressure on them and make them lessinteresting than someone who does a variety of things.

　　Conclusion

　　I believe that young people should have thechance to do a variety of activities and that a balance of sport and culturalactivities is best.