雅思大作文議論文高分范文解析：旅游話題

　　Internationaltourism is now more common than ever before. Some feel that this a positivetrend, while others do not.

　　Whatare your opinions on this?

　　Key words analysis

　　International tourism: 國際旅游

　　More … than ever before: 比之前更加…

　　common: 普遍，常見。同義替換有ordinary, usual

　　Some feel that … while others …: 一些人覺得國際旅游的發(fā)展帶來的正面效應(yīng)多，而另一些人覺得還是負(fù)面效應(yīng)多。這也是本文的論題。

　　Argument:

　　這是屬于議論文中的argument類型，通常需要作者發(fā)表自己對于論題的觀點。該題可采用發(fā)表個人見解，并給出論據(jù)進(jìn)行支持。

　　Possible reasons:

　　國際旅游將發(fā)達(dá)國家的問題帶入到發(fā)展中國家

　　國際旅游對許多地方造成了環(huán)境破壞

　　國際旅游影響了當(dāng)?shù)鼐用竦恼Ｉ?/p>

　　Model Essay 1 – Part 1

　　Introduction

　　International tourism has increasedconsiderably in the last 50 years. While this industry has certainly created agreat deal of wealth tor many destination countries, I believe that it hasactually caused far more problems than it has solved. The following are justtwo of the main difficulties involved with international tourism.

　　Main body 1

　　One particularly serious issue is thatinternational travel has brought western problems to developing countries. Onlywealthy people can afford to travel overseas. As a result, increasing numbersof tourists from rich (mostly western) countries now holiday in poorercountries like Thailand and Indonesia. In many of these places, this flood oftourists is closely associated with such problems as prostitution, alcoholismand drug abuse. Although international tourism can certainly bring peopletogether and create greater cross-cultural understanding, this will probablynot happen while it is still such a powerful sign of western power and lack ofmoral standards.

　　Model Essay 1 – Part 2

　　Main body 2

　　Even more worrying, however, is the damagethat international tourism has caused to the environment in many parts of theworld. Australia's Great Barrier Reef is an especially good example ofthis-large areas of coral reef have been slowly destroyed by the thousands ofboats, scuba divers and snorkelers that have visited it over the years.Likewise, Bali's famous Kuta Beach is now often covered in litter from thecrowds who go there. In order to maintain such tourist attractions, I feel wemust regulate international tourism more carefully.

　　Conclusion

　　To conclude, it is clear that the difficultiescreated by the growing international tourist trade are complicated and many.While they are certainly not impossible to overcome, I believe these problemswill probably continue for some time.