雅思作文：關(guān)于垃圾問題（點評）

The roads are dotted with trash, the railways are littered with decaying garbage and our cities are disgraced by plastic bags. Lately, the worsening rubbish problem has aroused people’s wide concern.Some hold the belief that it is an overstatement to claim that people have formed a “throw away”society, and that they just discard the used items,which is necessary. Others, however, firmly contend that people do develop a habit of throwing things away. Personally, I firmly side with the latter.

點評：作文采用了先闡述現(xiàn)在的垃圾的現(xiàn)象，然后接著引出了關(guān)于此現(xiàn)象不同的觀點。并在最后闡述了作者自己的觀點。里面的用詞很不錯。算是作文中的佼佼之筆。

It is no doubt that our cities are on the way towards becoming a huge landfill. To begin with,people are in the habit of littering. Nowadays, people tend to discard old items like outdated furniture and worn-out appliance, which are actually recoverable. Furthermore, due to the in adequate facilities of garbage collection, people throw away their refuse everywhere at will.In addition, rubbish is in rapid increase. In the first place the quickening tempo of modern lifestyle gives rise to people’s favor of disposable items for sake of convenience, which greatly adds the amount of rubbish. In the second place, the development of science and technology also contributes to it. It generates new product in a more frequent way, which makes the old ones cast aside as rubbish at a quicker pace. Consequently, our cities are decorated with trash.

In view of the severity of the issue, we should adopt immediate measure to address it.First of all, the government should play a leading role. It ought to bring in strong anti-littering laws, backed by heavy penalties and effective enforcement, to tackle the littering behaviors.Also, officials should make good use of mass media to promote the public’s awareness of environmental protection, making sure that everyone will become a conscious environment protector. Additionally, scientists can develop efficient technologies to degrade and recycle the rubbish. Research findings reveal that 63% of the refuse nowadays are recycled. Finally, it is essential for schools to attach importance to environmental education, so that every child will become environmentally friendly and get rid of the littering habit.

點評：在論文的主體部分，作者根據(jù)自己的觀點提出了自己的解決方法。1 +3 模式，第 1 句是主題句。 4 段論的作文的主體段是兩面討論，但是小編還是喜歡這樣的寫作，即主體段的觀點還是有側(cè)重的，把讓步段放在前面，最后 1 句話引出下一段，這樣過度地很自然，而且自己的觀點也比較明確。

In conclusion, people’s littering habit is turning our communities into a rubbish holder. It is high time that we took joint effort to solve the rubbish problem. Otherwise, we will live with rubbish in the future.

點評：最后作者總結(jié)了自己的觀點，并發(fā)出呼吁，希望大家善待我們的環(huán)境。

注釋：

decay.vi.衰敗，衰退，衰落

例句：The bodies buried in the fine ash slowly decayed... 埋在灰燼里的尸體慢慢地腐爛了

overstatement.n.夸大;大話;虛張;夸大的陳述

例句：True emotion ought not to require overstatement.

真實的感情不應(yīng)當(dāng)需要過分渲染。

facility.n.設(shè)備;

例句：Every facility was laid on to ease their homecoming.

動用了一切設(shè)施以緩解他們的回鄉(xiāng)之困。

penalty.n.懲罰; 刑罰;

例句：It was a crime of espionage and carried the death penalty.

這是間諜罪，應(yīng)判死刑