Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on learning to appreciate others by commenting on the remark, “When you choose to see the good in others, you end up finding the good in yourself .” You can cite examples to illustrate your point. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
審題立意
1. 導(dǎo)語(yǔ)解讀：要求考生從評(píng)論題目中的“當(dāng)你選擇去發(fā)現(xiàn)他人好的一面，你就會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)自己美好的一面”出發(fā)，就“學(xué)會(huì)欣賞他人”這一話題展開論述。
2. 文章立意：如果你欣賞他人，他人才會(huì)欣賞你。因此，欣賞他人很重要，我們要學(xué)會(huì)欣賞他人。
寫作思路
1. 第一段簡(jiǎn)要評(píng)論題目中給定的話語(yǔ)的含義，然后提出論點(diǎn)：我們應(yīng)該學(xué)會(huì)欣賞他人。
2. 第二段通過排比論證的方式闡述學(xué)會(huì)欣賞他人的重要性：既有利于自身，又有利于他人和社會(huì)。
3. 第三段點(diǎn)明應(yīng)如何欣賞他人。
參考范文
“When you choose to see the good in others, you end up finding the good in yourself.” The remark tells us that if you appreciate others you’ll be appreciated by others. Therefore, we should learn to appreciate others. 1
It is a happy thing to appreciate others and be appreciated in return. Learning to appreciate others can make you become open-minded; learning to appreciate others can make you popular among people around you; learning to appreciate others can make yourself be appreciated by others; learning to appreciate others can make your heart full of love; learning to appreciate others can make you become benevolent; learning to appreciate others can help you become wise. Besides, learning to appreciate others is helpful to establish a healthy and harmonious interpersonal relationship and a bright and beautiful world. 2
How to appreciate others? App-reciating others means accepting, tolerating, praising, respecting and loving others. Take a boy of my classmates as an example. He often gets first place, but he is too arrogant and therefore he is not popular in our class. Although he’s very smart, he is not accepted by others because he can’t appreciate others. Let’s get along with each other with a kind and sincere heart and appreciate each other. 3
“當(dāng)你選擇去發(fā)現(xiàn)他人好的一面，你就會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)自己美好的一面?！边@句話告訴我們?nèi)绻阈蕾p他人，他人也會(huì)欣賞你。因此，我們應(yīng)該學(xué)著去欣賞他人。
欣賞他人而他人也欣賞你是一件快樂的事情。學(xué)會(huì)欣賞他人可以使你更加開明；學(xué)會(huì)欣賞他人可以使你在朋友中受到歡迎；學(xué)會(huì)欣賞他人可以使他人也欣賞你；學(xué)會(huì)欣賞他人可以使你充滿愛心；學(xué)會(huì)欣賞他人可以使你變得仁慈；學(xué)會(huì)欣賞他人可以使你變得睿智。此外，學(xué)會(huì)欣賞他人有助于建立起健康和諧的人際關(guān)系和歡快美好的世界。
如何欣賞他人呢？欣賞他人意味著接受、容忍、贊美、尊重、愛他人。比如我們班的一個(gè)男生，他經(jīng)常是班中的第一名，但是他太高傲自大，因此在班里不受歡迎。盡管他很聰明，但因?yàn)椴粫?huì)欣賞他人而不被他人接受。讓我們用真誠(chéng)的心與人相處并相互欣賞。
范文點(diǎn)評(píng)
1. 開篇簡(jiǎn)要評(píng)述給定話語(yǔ)的含義，引出文章的觀點(diǎn)：學(xué)會(huì)欣賞他人。
2. 第二段采用排比論證的方式論述學(xué)會(huì)欣賞他人的好處，緊扣作文話題。
3. 第三段運(yùn)用例證的方式論證如何欣賞他人，進(jìn)一步升華觀點(diǎn)。
要點(diǎn)用法
end up doing sth. 以做某事而告終
open-minded adj. 思想開明的
benevolent adj. 仁慈的；慈善的
harmonious adj. 和諧的；和睦的
get along with 與……相處
句法點(diǎn)評(píng)
1. It is a happy thing to appreciate others and be appreciated in return.
It代替真正的主語(yǔ)，即動(dòng)詞不定式to appreciate others and be appreciated，充當(dāng)形式主語(yǔ)。in return意為“反過來(lái)，反而”。
2. Take a boy of my classmates as an example.
take...as an example是“舉例”的表達(dá)方式，又可以說(shuō)成take...for example或者直接表示為take sth./sb.意為“以某人/某事為例”。
