【BEC寫作范文】Sample: 求職信

首先練習一篇求職信~

要求：You are looking for an interesting and challenging summer job. Write an email, using between 320 and 350 words, applying for the post of student tour leader. The school’s email address is [email protected]

To: [email protected]

Subject:Job Application

Attachment:CV.doc(10KB)

Dear Sir/Madam,

With reference to your advertisement in yesterday's edition of The Times of Malta, I am interested in applying for the post of tour leader for Italian students learning English as a foreign language at your school of English.[1]

I am 22 years old and I am currently studying for a diploma in Tourism at MCAST. After that I hope to follow a career in the travel industry.[2]During the last summer holidays I worked as a youth leader in various school projects and I enjoyed the work very much because it involved organising various recreational and academic activities for students at school. Next summer I would like to do something more varied and challenging, and for this reason I am interested in the job of tour leader.[3]

I feel that I would be well-suited for this job as I enjoy working with young people very much. I have a lot of energy and enthusiasm and am also responsible and reliable.[4]

I have attached my CV as a Word document. You will notice that I have supervised children on a range of sports and cultural activities within the school Scout Group./ I have also, on several occasions, been responsible for transport arrangements and tickets./ On two separate occasions I have also carried out voluntary work abroad, at a summer camp for school children. I was group leader and besides organising many social and cultural activities, I was also responsible for the children’s well-being throughout the whole experience./ I am also fluent in English, so I will also be a good influence on the students of your English School as they can practise their English outside school hours.[5]

I would be grateful if you would consider my application. I am available for interview any weekday afternoon and you can email me or telephone me on the number below.[6]

I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours faithfully,

John Mizzi

tel:99043612

[1]首先表達自己信息來源(advertisment)，表達求職意向(tour leader)。

[2]表達自己的職業(yè)規(guī)劃(career in travel industry)。

[3]簡要介紹前期工作經(jīng)歷(I worked as...)及收獲體會(I enjoyed it because...)。

[4]開始論證：為什么自己適合這一工作，自己的優(yōu)勢在哪里(I would be well-suited for this job as...)。

[5]具體描述自己的閃光點。通過舉例說明自己培養(yǎng)了哪些能力。

[6]最后表達感謝，留下聯(lián)系方式。

注意：1.時態(tài)。求職信使用的時態(tài)根據(jù)表達內(nèi)容的不同而變化，求職意向、自己的優(yōu)勢等長時間沒有改變的東西一般用現(xiàn)在時;職業(yè)規(guī)劃可以用將來時或I would like to;描述工作經(jīng)歷等過去的事情可用過去式(I was group leader，這里是單純陳述過去特殊的一個時間點上“我是領隊”)，強調(diào)過去發(fā)生的事情對現(xiàn)在的影響(如，I have also carried out voluntary work abroad, at a summer camp for school children. 這里是強調(diào)“因為我參加過國外的志愿活動，在這方面我有更多的經(jīng)驗”).

再來一篇~

要求：Write an email to apply for the job advertised as follows: Wanted: Temporary secretary for general office duties. Applicant must have secondary school level of education and be computer literate

. Good work habits and ability to work in a team necessary. Send your application via email to the Senior Clerk, Mr Muscat, on [email protected] . You should write between 180 and 200 words.

來試一試~Sample

to:[email protected]

subjectz: job application

attachment: School leaving certificate.doc(10KB)

Dear Mr Muscat,

I am writing in connection with your advertisement for a temporary secretary.

I am 16 years old and I have just completed my secondary education. I have seven SEC level passes including Maths, Maltese and English and I also have my ECDL* licence. I am very skilled at using computers and I regularly use Word to write documents, and Outlook to send emails. Moreover, I know how to make use of spellcheckers and the thesaurus to improve my writing.

During my years in secondary school I always did quite well and received good reports from my teachers. Attached please find a scanned copy of my school leaving certificate. I am tidy and organized in my work and as a student, my notes were always properly filed and my homework and schoolwork were neat.

I would very much like to be considered for the job as I feel I have the necessary skills and qualifications. In addition, I believe I am hard-working and though I do not have any work experience I am very motivated to learn.

I look forward to hearing from you,

Regards,

Jonathan Brincat