1 做模版:不用找什么馬思德,就拿幾片范文,找?guī)拙浔容^拽的結(jié)構(gòu)型句子,拼湊出一個你自己順手的框架即可。不用到處找,也不用找很多,一個框架即可,當(dāng)然,準(zhǔn)備一些可以替換的詞:比如recommendation替換conclusion.漂亮句子很多,但“若水三千,我只掬一瓢飲”。
2 找出主要的錯誤類型,每種寫出一道兩句經(jīng)典的表述即可。
3 考時30分鐘分三個階段:一)12-15分鐘,寫出完整的第一段,三個征文段的topic sentence,和完整的末段。寫第一段的同時就構(gòu)思topicsentence,末段無非是重復(fù)結(jié)論和三句topic。這樣的好處是結(jié)構(gòu)已經(jīng)完整了,你不用慌了。(其實已經(jīng)有3分了)。二)13-10分鐘,完成三段正文。我以前覺得這個很困難,后來想通了。無非是把這層意思說清楚就行。3句話就夠了。也夠長了。三)5分鐘check.還一個作用時,是在前面沒有完成,還有一個buffer,也不至于彈盡糧絕。
4 非常措施:考試萬一時間不夠,首段就抄原句(當(dāng)然6分就沒有了);如果時間還不夠,末段就cut-paste首段和topic 的文本,稍加修改即可(當(dāng)然5分就沒有了)。但是,結(jié)構(gòu)是完整的。
5 ok作文法的精髓和適用范圍:精髓:“看上去很美”。適用范圍:不想得6分的人(因為想的6分的人追求的是“實際上也很美”。如果運氣好,可以的5分,運氣不好,可以的4分。
Argument模板
開頭:
The recommendation endorsed in the argument is that ...(改寫題目觀點). The author employs several lines of reasoning to reach this conclusion. In the first place, the author reasons that ...(原因一). Furthermore, the author reasons that ...(原因二). At first glance, the author’s argument appears to be somewhat convincing, but further reflection reveals that it is based on some dubious assumptions.
結(jié)尾:
In summary, the conclusion reached in the argument is both invalid and misleading. To persuade me that ...(改寫題目觀點), the author would need to provide clear evidence that ...(支持題目的證據(jù)一) and that...(支持題目的證據(jù)二). In addition, to better evaluate the author ’s claim we would need more information ...(信息內(nèi)容,如about或doing). Only with these more convincing evidence and proper information could this argument become more than just an emotional appeal.
Issue模板
中間幾段只給出了思路,想著考試的時候按題目發(fā)揮。。
但是我考的時候不完全是按這個思路寫的,我寫的那篇沒找到可以admittedly的內(nèi)容,我就按主體分了三段用平行關(guān)系寫下來了。比較急,所以句子不會出彩??偨Y(jié)一下,還是寫了五段一共。
Introduction:
It has been a received and uncontroversial opinion that … (常識,共識或現(xiàn)象---寫比題目范圍更大的話)
1. 改寫題目(詞性,句子結(jié)構(gòu),動作發(fā)出者,同義近義詞)
2. Thesis Statement(中心句,給出立場)
同意:The more attentively I consider and investigate the reason why ...(支持的觀點), the more I become convinced that they are cogent and conclusive.
反對:However, far too little attention has been paid to ...(明顯缺點), and this consequently creates the glaring shortcomings in the argument above.
部分同意: As a matter of fact, there is no such thing as a valid conclusion in all circumstances. The final judgment always relies on a careful case-by-case analysis. As far as I am concerned, I partially consent to the speaker’s opinion that ...(支持部分), but I do not agree with him that ...(反對部分).
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