一個建議的版本可以是這樣的,如果想表達很喜歡Forrest Gump《阿甘正傳》這部電影,可以說:“I love this movie because I can learn something about America's history. For example,I know the lost generation and Watergate scandal through this movie. People living in UnitedStates start doubting the policy of government, and of course, how the Vietnam War affected American people's lives. People want to change their attitudes to the war, and look for their own freedom and democracy. So I can have the opportunity to enrich my knowledge concerning this through this masterpiece.”
這是一部非常“有文化”的電影。導(dǎo)演將美國重要的歷史事件默默的安排在阿甘的經(jīng)歷中,通過時代的變遷反映出美國在各個時期的特征和美國年輕人的追求。如果考生可以用“迷失的一代”,“水門事件”,“越戰(zhàn)”來舉例,rater馬上就明白我喜歡這部電影的原因了,而且通過這些美國人耳熟能詳?shù)睦右搀w現(xiàn)出考生滿腹經(jīng)綸,是一個非常了解美國歷史和文化的優(yōu)秀考生。
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再舉一例,比如談到一所好的大學(xué)需要具備什么樣的特點這道題時,會說“The university has a good library.”或“The university has numerous trees.”就此停止了,而沒能有理有據(jù)地展開。
正確的表述比如:“My university has a good library, and it is one of the largest and most valuable research libraries in China. It has about 6 million items in its collection, including over 2 million books and pamphlets and thousands of charts, engravings, manuscripts, map and so forth. The library's half million manuscript collection reflects different aspects of Chinese life and culture. And the library has grown so large that it could no longer be housed in one building. Two more buildings were built to accommodate the ever increasing collection in the library. Also, the library is computerized, so students can research the informationor E-book freely when the professor assigns the new homework, which makes the use of the library a pleasant experience.”
要想避免表達思想內(nèi)容空洞就可以按照上面大學(xué)圖書館一例來把自己的想法展開。具體要細化到什么程度還是由考生自己決定,不過強烈建議考生可以根據(jù)自己的生活經(jīng)驗和真實的感受(比如真的對自己學(xué)校的圖書館)進行客觀的評價,而不是在考場中隨性的編造例子,畢竟編造的內(nèi)容是你臨時想的,你也不能確定你的創(chuàng)造是否能hold住45秒的答題時間,反而自己真實的感受更容易表達。所以平時對于生活中的素材,或是一些新聞實事合理積累也對話題的展開大有裨益。