雅思口語part2語料精講：描述一個有創(chuàng)造力的音樂家或發(fā)明家

　　Part Two 話題精講

　　Describe a creative musician / inventor

　　You should say :

　　Who the person is?

　　What he/she does?How you know him?

　　Why you think he/she's creative ?

　　高分參考：

　　1.I ‘d like to talk about jay chow , who’s one of the most decorated musicians in Taiwan . in recent years ,he’s won numerous music awards . In my opinion , what makes him so outstanding is his talent in composing music and writing lyrics . later , i'll tell you about it .

　　2.It’s said that he’s a typical workaholic .So I guess his schedule must be filled with work ,for example : he needs to perform at concerts , attend some important music events . Besides working hard , he still devotes a lot of time doing charity .He’s helped many homeless children and people with disabilities .

　　3.As to how I know him . well , he’s a celebrity , a household name in my country . Many years ago , when I was in high school , he’s already made his name . His CDs could be sold out in a few hours . People waited in line to buy tickets to his concerts . Those days were crazy .

　　4.Lastly , I'll tell you about why i think he's so creative . He’s a full package . He not only sings well , but also writes a number of bestselling songs . He successfully adds Chinese elements , like : kung Fu , into his lyrics , perfectly combining Chinese culture with modern music style . That’s incredible .

　　高分語料解析：

　　1. I ‘d like to talk about jay chow , who’s one of the most decorated musicians in Taiwan: 這是一個標準的高分開頭， 有詞組，有復合句型， 有適當的形容詞， 加分的!

　　2. most decorated musician: 獲獎很多的音樂人 (decorated 這個詞在形容音樂人或者藝術家的時候很常用。表示獲獎很多的。加分詞!)

　　3. numerous music awards :無數的音樂獎項

　　4. what makes him so outstanding is his talent in composing music and writing lyrics: 讓他如此杰出的是他在作詞譜曲中的天賦。

　　5. later , i will tell you about it: 這是一句常用的連接句。在雅思口語考試中， 沒有適當的鏈接的話是沒有辦法拿到coherence的分數的。

　　6. typical workaholic: 典型的工作狂

　　7. perform at concerts: (大家來學一學標準的表達吧)做演唱會

　　8. attend some important music events:參加重要的音樂盛典

　　9. Besides working hard , he still devotes a lot of time doing charity : 除了工作極其努力之外， 他還把很多的時間貢獻給了慈善事業(yè)。

　　10. homeless children:無家可歸的兒童

　　11. people with disabilities:殘疾人士

　　12. As to how I know him: 連接句(有時候可以用as to 加上問題的方式來引出下文，拿連貫度的分數)

　　13. he’s a celebrity , a household name in my country:他在我們國家是名人，一個家喻戶曉的名字。

　　14. made his name: 成名(很好的詞組!有加分的!)

　　15.His CDs could be sold out in a few hours . People waited in line to buy tickets to his concerts :他的cd會在幾小時內賣完， 人們排長隊買他演唱會的票子。

　　16.Lastly , I'll tell you why i think he's so creative:連接句 (拿連貫度的分數)

　　17.He’s a full package: 他是個全才 (full package 是個很好的詞組， 加分詞!)

　　18.He successfully adds Chinese elements , like : kung Fu , into his lyrics , perfectly combining Chinese culture with modern music style . that’s incredible:他成功的把中國元素比如中國功夫加入到他的歌詞中，把中國文化和流行音樂完美的融合在了一起(這個解釋那么地道， 加分句!)