當考官問道:“Do you like Music?”
考生回答:“觀點:yes, I do.
理由:Cuz music makes me feel relaxed.
例子:for example, sweet and light music are the best choice.
下面我們來根據(jù)口語的四大評分標準來提高我們的答案:
Fluency流利,Grammar語法,Vocabulary詞匯,pronunciation發(fā)音
觀點 (舊):yes, I do
觀點(新):yes, I’m pretty keen on music, I’m just so passionate about it, really a big fan of it.
理由(舊):Cuz music makes me feel relaxed.
理由(新):Cuz music can purify your mind. When listening to the music, all the pressure, panic and anxiety due to the fierce competition of the quick-paced society just disappear.
例子(舊):for example, sweet and light music are the best choice.
例子(新):especially, for instance, my favorite is some American country music, such as the famous one “ take me home, country roads”, it makes you feel a world where there are nice people, clear streams, fresh air, vast farmland and country roads with daisies and beautiful sunshine.
新的答案在語法是7分,詞匯也是7分;如果學生在表達的時候能做到完美,即流利獲得9分和發(fā)音也獲得9分,那么,四項平均以后的得分就是8分的口語。在現(xiàn)實的考試當中,如果學生的Fluency 6分,Pronunciation也6分,那得分就是6.5分。
這種評分方法將會繼續(xù)貫穿于口語的第二部分和第三部分,考官會根據(jù)考生在三部分的綜合表現(xiàn)打出分數(shù),下面讓我們來研究一下第二部分:
第二部分(根據(jù)要求)兩分鐘即興演講
例如:考官要求你描述一個城市,可以寫一分鐘筆記,要求講話一到二分鐘。
Describe a city that you like best ①
Where it is ②
What are the general features ③
What you can do there ④
Explain why it is your favorite city ⑤
根據(jù)雅思口語考試的四大評分標準,我們來設計答案:
Fluency流利,Grammar語法,Vocabulary詞匯,pronunciation發(fā)音
Describe a city that you like:描述一個你喜歡的城市:
觀點:杭州是我去過的最印象深刻的城市之一
Hangzhou is one of the most impressive cities where I have even been
理由:因為我感到印象很深刻對于交通、風景如畫的景點,和地方特色美食。
because I was deeply impressed by the transport, the picturesque scenery spot, and the food specialty there.
例子:具體來說,我想談談城際特快列車,西湖和東坡肉。
To be more precise, I’m gonna talk about the intercity express train, the west lake and the soysauced Dongpo Pork.
?、?Whre it is, 他在哪里
觀點:我很喜歡她的地理位置,杭州位于中國的南部,在長江三角洲上。
I particularly like its situation. Hangzhou is located on the southern part of china, on the Yangtze river delta.
理由:你知道,坐和諧號城際特快列車,從上海去那里很方便。
You know, from shanghai to Hangzhou, it is really convenient to go by CRH (china railway highspeed), namely, the inter-city express.
例子:上周我剛去過杭州,我花了54元,兩個小時就到了杭州,而且和諧號是非常舒適和愜意的,平穩(wěn)的滑行,咆哮行駛在時速198公里/小時,跟英吉利海峽峽面的歐洲之星特快列車是差不多的。
Actually, I just went there last week, I paid 54 kaui, it took me 2 hours on the train, by the way, the CRH was really comfy and cozy, smooth and stable, roaring down the rail at 198 kilometers per hour,quite similar to the EuroStar express train under the English Channel.
③What are the general features 什么是主要的總體特色?
觀點:是西湖讓我如此喜歡杭州
it is the west lake that greatly contributes to my fondness for the city.
理由:湖濱自然的成為人們休閑散步,同時呼吸新鮮空氣的地方
The Lakeside naturally serves as a place for people to have a bit of walk,enjoying the fresh air at the same time.
例子:由于西湖在杭州的市中心,周圍有諸多的高樓大廈,所以幾乎每一個來杭州的人都會來感受自然和城市和諧結合得這樣一個美景。
Since the west lake is in the downtown area of Hangzhou, right among the concrete jungle of the city, nearly everyone who visits Hangzhou likes to come and enjoy the harmonious integration between the Nature of the lake and the modernization of buildings nearby.
?、躓hat you can do there 你能在那里做什么?
觀點:東坡肉是很受歡迎的一種特色菜,即對旅游者來說,也對當?shù)厝藖碚f。
Soysauced Dongpo Pork is a very popular specialty dish among tourists and locals as well.
理由:因為他味道很重很咸,很肥很好吃但不油膩。
Because it has strong flavour, very savoury, fatty, yummy but not greasy.
例子:杭州最正宗的東坡肉在西湖邊上的樓外樓餐廳,每天都擠滿了人。邊享美食邊賞湖景。這就是我們所謂的生活啊!
The most authentic Dongpo Pork can be served in the restaurant, Building Beyond Building, beside the west lake, it is always packed with customers. They usually chose a window seat to enjoy the delicate cuisine while appreciating the placidness of the lake. That is what we call LIFE!
?、軪xplain why it is your favorite city解釋為什么這是你最喜歡的城市
觀點:這是一次難忘的旅行
this trip is the one which I shall never forget.
理由:他讓我大開眼界。
It made my mind open.
例子:我高度推薦您有空也去看一看
I highly recommend you to go and have a look.
接下來,讓我們繼續(xù)分析第三部分
第三部分社會客觀分析問答題
考官問道:what kind of qualities a good leader should have?
考生回答:
觀點1:A good leader should be passionate,
理由1:Because his passion will help him do well.
例子1:In business, a passionate boss can do his business better when he likes it.
觀點2:A good leader also should be like a model.
理由2:Because followers will all learn from their leader.
例子2:In Business, successful leadership is mainly about whether his employees work as hard as their boss does.
根據(jù)雅思口語考試的四大評分標準,我們來提高答案:
Fluency流利,Grammar語法,Vocabulary詞匯,pronunciation發(fā)音
觀點1(舊):A good leader should be passionate.
觀點1(新):successful leaders would probably be quite passionate and enthusiastic about what they do.
成功的領導人應該很可能是非常激情和熱情地對待他們所作的事情。
理由1(舊):Because his passion will help him do well.
理由1(新):Success comes easily when someone is obsessed with his career. He will be more relentless in the pursuit of his goals if he’s keen on his business. He will achieve his peak performance only when he’s doing the thing which interests him or something he cares about.
成功來得容易當一個人沉溺于他的職業(yè),他會更加不停歇地追求他的目標如果他很喜歡他的生意,他將會到達頂峰表現(xiàn)只有當他做自己感興趣的事情和他在意的事情。
例子1(舊):In business, a passionate boss can do his business better when he likes it.
例子1(新):Entrepreneurs who succeed do not mind the fact that they are putting in 15 or 18 hours a day to their business because they absolutely love what they do.Success in business is all about patience and hard work, which can only be attained if someone is passionate and crazy with his tasks and activities. So, most of the time, the more passionate a man is, the more successful he can be.
成功的企業(yè)家不介意一個事實,他們每天工作15到18個小時僅僅因為他們絕對的喜歡他們所做的,只有當你對瘋狂的熱愛你的任務和活動的時候,你才會耐心和努力工作,這使你商業(yè)上成功。所以,大多數(shù)情況下,你越是激情,你就會越成功。
觀點2(舊):A good leader also should be reliable.
觀點2(新): True leaders should have trustworthiness built on good relationship with his followers.
真正的領導人應該由別人的信任,建立在他很好的人際關系。
理由2(舊):because no one will work for the person who can not be trusted.
理由2(新):the way they deal with people will lay the foundation for the strength of their groups. The stronger the relationship is, the stronger the subordinates’ trust and confidence is in their capabilities.
他們處理和人們的關系為他們隊的優(yōu)點建立了基礎,這種關系越強,他的下屬的對他的信任和信心就越加成為他們的綜合能力。
例子2(舊):In Business, successful leadership is mainly about whether his employees believe in their boss or not.
例子2(新):Studies have shown that one fundamental basis of business leadership is the trust and confidence that employees have on their manager. Only when they have faith in their leader will they go through hell and high water for him and for the organization。
研究表明一個商業(yè)成功領導的基礎是他員工對經(jīng)理的信任和信心,只有他們信任領導人時,他們才會跋山涉水為組織效力。