1合理拓展
提問(wèn):Do you work or are you a student?
考生回答: I am a student.
雖然的確是回答了問(wèn)題,但毫無(wú)拓展??脊儆忠趺磁袛嗄愕目谡Z(yǔ)分?jǐn)?shù)呢?PART 1因?yàn)閱?wèn)題短,大家也許能夠發(fā)現(xiàn)到自己有沒(méi)有進(jìn)行拓展。但是到了PART 3本身題目就很長(zhǎng)的情況下,有些考生直接復(fù)述了一遍題目,然后說(shuō)個(gè)YES/NO 就算是回答了…… 是來(lái)和考官面基的么?
修改后: I am a student. I am currently doing my Bachelor’s degree in XXX university. (OR I am a third year undergrad from XXX university.)
二選一問(wèn)題先選擇,首先說(shuō)明了學(xué)生身份,然后擴(kuò)展到自己正在某某院校修習(xí)學(xué)士學(xué)位。這樣的答案就完整的把自己的現(xiàn)狀清晰的描述給考官了。
2深究語(yǔ)法,保持答案完整
提問(wèn):Why did you choose to study that?
考生回答:Since I am a child, I want to design my own clothes.
不說(shuō)語(yǔ)法細(xì)節(jié)問(wèn)題,單單看答題思路。第一,考官會(huì)在P1階段考核時(shí)態(tài)使用能力,所以經(jīng)常能在一組問(wèn)題中同時(shí)遇到現(xiàn)在時(shí)和過(guò)去時(shí)的問(wèn)題??脊賳?wèn)的是你高三的決定,所以要注意時(shí)態(tài)!第二,這個(gè)回答中,烤鴨談到了自己還是一個(gè)孩子的時(shí)候,希望設(shè)計(jì)衣服,但是卻沒(méi)有下文了,斷片了~
修改后:Since I was a child, I had always wanted to design my own clothes. So when the opportunity presented itself, I chose to study fashion design without a single doubt.
其實(shí)很多考生都有斷片的問(wèn)題,有一些是認(rèn)為回答夠“多”了,就收尾了。有一些則是認(rèn)為考官應(yīng)該懂我的意思,那我后面就不說(shuō)了吧~ 咳咳,考官是你們家隔壁老王么?
3緊扣話題
提問(wèn):Would you say it’s a difficult major to study? Why?
考生回答:Actually, in this major, people would have the special ideas in the design.
不要以為你說(shuō)一個(gè)actually就很local 了,完全沒(méi)有回答到問(wèn)題上面好么?親,你的專業(yè)到底難么?困難的地方是什么? special ideas,創(chuàng)意?
修改后: Yes, I think it’s quite difficult. Unlike many conventional majors, fashion design is all about creativity and change. Reading textbooks and doing assignments are not enough to guarantee us a good score. We have to push our limits, think outside the box, and read whatever there is to inspire us to come up with new ideas.
其實(shí)PART 1也會(huì)有長(zhǎng)問(wèn)題??脊僬J(rèn)可你的水平,就會(huì)問(wèn)一些復(fù)雜的問(wèn)題,這樣才好定分。那么我們就可以多聊一點(diǎn)了。首先,說(shuō)明了這個(gè)major的確是困難的。通過(guò)和conventional majors的對(duì)比,說(shuō)明了在學(xué)習(xí)專業(yè)的過(guò)程中僅僅聽(tīng)好課,做好作業(yè)是不夠的,對(duì)比一下,從而突顯其困難性。
4觀點(diǎn)要明確,主次要分明
提問(wèn):Are there many advertisements in China?
考生回答:Sure, in the TV show, you also can see some, many advertising in this TV show.
雖然舉例能夠讓答案更加接地氣,但是不能把例子當(dāng)成觀點(diǎn)來(lái)用。這樣的話會(huì)讓考官覺(jué)得你沒(méi)有總結(jié)能力,或者說(shuō)你的水平無(wú)法完整地表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)。
修改后: Yes, indeed. Advertisements are everywhere. Whenever we turn on the TV, look through a newspaper, open the mailbox, or surf the Internet, advertisements would immediately jump into our sight. It’s no exaggeration to say that we live in the world of advertisements, and some of them are really lousy.
“沒(méi)錯(cuò),廣告到處都是!”這樣子是表達(dá)比未修改前的“當(dāng)然”要更生動(dòng)具體!而且下文中除了TV之外,還提到了報(bào)紙啊,郵箱啊,甚至是網(wǎng)絡(luò)。舉例也是要有技巧的,否則就是白搭~
5邏輯要清晰,答案要具體
提問(wèn):Do advertisements ever influence your choice about what to buy?
學(xué)生回答: Yeah. Because we don’t have too much time to know one by one the products, so we need the advertising to know which is the best or which is the worst.
我們回答問(wèn)題的時(shí)候,不能有“考官肯定都知道,有些事就不要拆穿了”這種心理。上述的答案中,就帶過(guò)了一下“因?yàn)槲覀儧](méi)時(shí)間了解,所以才需要廣告”,但是為什么不說(shuō)得再具體一點(diǎn)呢?
修改后: I have to say yes. Because when I want to buy something, especially something I am not familiar with, it’s difficult to decide which brand to choose, since they look almost the same. Then I tend to choose the one advertised. It seems more reliable than those I've never heard of.
在這里,就具體到了我們沒(méi)空了解到那些我們不熟悉的商品,所以我們才需要廣告。誰(shuí)都不喜歡“假大空”,能夠把答案做到具體化,才是真正的高分套路!
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