托福寫作高分滿分范文點(diǎn)評(píng)和思路解析：朋友人數(shù)的選擇

　　Spend time with one or two close friends, or with a large number of friends?

　　Some people prefer to spend time with one or two close friends. Others choose to spend time with a large number of friends. Compare the advantages of each choice. Which of these two ways of spending time do you prefer? Use specific reasons to support your answer.

　　寫作思路展開(kāi)結(jié)構(gòu)分析

　　這個(gè)話題需要大家對(duì)比的是少數(shù)朋友和許多朋友，其實(shí)是一個(gè)擇友觀的問(wèn)題。這個(gè)題目本身沒(méi)有明顯傾向性，考生可以結(jié)合自己的實(shí)際情況來(lái)說(shuō)。選擇和一兩個(gè)親密朋友一起玩，可以說(shuō)自己跟愿意和少數(shù)志同道合的朋友共度時(shí)間，選擇和一大群朋友一起玩，則可以說(shuō)自己喜歡參加集體活動(dòng)跟許多人建立友誼等等。

　　本話題高分范文賞析

　　Of the two possibilities, I prefer the first, that is, to spend my time with one or two close friends, because I enjoy close friendship with one or two people and the cozy atmosphere of spending time with close friends. When spending time with a large number of friends, it tends to be difficult to form solid, meaningful friendships with any of the people, since cultivating friendship needs time to communicate. On the other hand, when spending time with only one or two close friends, it is more likely to get to know these people on a very close level. I think this closeness is very important in a friendship. In fact, if I share no closeness with a person, then I do not consider him a friend; I consider him an acquaintance. Moreover, it is not only closeness but also the cozy atmosphere that makes me prefer spending time with only one or two friends. In this cozy atmosphere, I always feel there is nothing that I could not or would not tell my friends, as they feel the same. This means we can trust each other completely. Although this doesn't at all mean there's no cozy atmosphere or complete trust when spending time with many friends, it is my observation that everyone tends to be more open in private. This is why I enjoy the intimate friendship. In addition, spending time with few friends can save much time, since the relationship among a few people is more likely to be simpler. I'm not proficient at dealing with relationship among people, and often get frustrated communicating with a crowd. However, when I am spending time with one or two close friends, this doesn't matter at all. In fact, my close friends, notwithstanding few in number, always tell me I'm their best friend who can truly care about them and handle the relationship smoothly. I think it is my personality that has me make such a choice.