托福寫作高分滿分范文點(diǎn)評(píng)和思路解析：學(xué)校買書還是買電腦？

　　Should school buy computers or books?

　　Your school has enough money to purchase either computers for students or books for the library. Which should your school choose to buy — computers or books? Use specific reasons and examples to support your recommendation.

　　寫作思路展開結(jié)構(gòu)分析

　　兩邊都可以寫，無(wú)論是書還是電腦都有各自的優(yōu)點(diǎn)和缺點(diǎn)可以展開，不過(guò)要注意圍繞題目對(duì)學(xué)校有幫助這點(diǎn)來(lái)寫。比如選擇書籍，可以說(shuō)計(jì)算機(jī)的壞處，比如計(jì)算機(jī)更新?lián)Q代太快一直要投入很多錢;計(jì)算機(jī)并不萬(wàn)能;沒(méi)有好的軟件計(jì)算機(jī)發(fā)揮不了作用，而軟件又是很大的花費(fèi);用計(jì)算機(jī)上網(wǎng)找的資料不完整，無(wú)權(quán)威性等等。 。

　　本話題高分范文賞析

　　There are many difficult decisions that school supervisors must make in order to ensure the success of their students. One of these decisions is how to spend money when it is available. Quite often, extra funds are spent on either computers or books. Given the choice, I believe that money is best spent on computers.

　　New technology is being created faster and faster. Each year, IBM develops a new "super computer" that is hundreds of times faster than the previous model. With this constantly changing technology, it is easy for schools to be left behind because they cannot afford new gear. Students deserve to learn on the best technology available, so schools should always upgrade their computers whenever possible. Computers also offer students a wealth of information, perhaps more than books can provide. It is now possible to buy e-books, dictionaries and encyclopedias for a computer. These computer versions of popular research tools are much better than their hardcover predecessors. For example, a computer encyclopedia takes up no space in the library, it allows students to access the information instantly, and it is much more cost effective than buying the entire series on paper. Also, the Internet allows students to find information on anything their hearts desire.

　　Finally, spending school funds on computers is more beneficial than spending money on books because computers prepare the students for the working world. In today's society, to attain a high paying position in a company it is necessary to have basic computer skills. If students do not have the ability to learn such skills, they will be left behind while others succeed in their place. Accordingly, I feel it is better for schools to spend money on computers rather than books. In addition to the reasons listed above, it is important to note that most major cities have extensive libraries that a local school would be hard-pressed to match. However, libraries frequently do not house computers, and if they do, they are constantly in use by other patrons. In many cases, the only chance a young person has to use a computer is at his/her school.