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托福寫作滿分精選句式分析點評 讓步論述高分句式推薦

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2019年09月12日

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  托福寫作評分標(biāo)準中對于考生的句式運用有一定要求,只是簡單句的堆積必然會導(dǎo)致句式方面的扣分。而想要寫出既實用又漂亮的高分句式對考生來說并非易事,需要一定的積累。所以下面小編就來為大家分析點評一些托福寫作的滿分精選句式。

  托福寫作滿分句式推薦:讓步論述類

  原文材料:

  Less well-known, but no less competitive, are David and James Livingston, two brothers who, in April 2003, raced on opposite sides in the Oxford and Cambridge University Boat Race, one of the toughest sporting challenges in the world.

  推薦句型:

  Less+adj., but no less+adj.

  推薦理由:

  簡潔又漂亮的讓步句型。“雖然不。。,但是。。。”。大家可以體會Barack Obama在其就職演說中說的這段話:" These(指上文說的可以看得見的危機) are the indicators of crisis, subject to data and statistics. Less measurable, but no less profound is a sapping of confidence across our land--a nagging fear that America's decline is inevitable, and that the next generation must lower its sights."

  原創(chuàng)例句:

  1. Less measurable, but no less profound is the depression and stress felt by the young adults who struggle to survive in the metropolis.

  2. Less measurable, but no less profound is the whopping adverse effect produced on the individuals and on their descendants by the modern city, which consists of monstrous edifices and of dark, narrow streets full of petrol fumes and toxic gases, torn by the noise of the taxicabs, lorries and buses, and thronged ceaselessly by great crowds.

  3. Less well-known, but no less persuasive is the example of John Nash, an American mathematician who, in 1994, won the Nobel prize in economics for his ground-breaking work in the field of game theory.

  學(xué)以致用:

  1. Your job has greater happiness than your social life.

  工作快樂還是社會生活更快樂?,F(xiàn)在社會生活壓力這么大,節(jié)奏這么快,工作狂才覺得工作更歡樂呢。所以如果不同意題目的說法,上面的例句就可以用上了。

  Less measurable, but no less profound is the immense pressure that those fledgling employees undertake, who are eager to cover basic expense of living and maintain their daily life.

  2. Agree or disagree, the rapid growth of cities has a mostly positive impact on the development of the society.

  這個題目很顯然可以原封不動得用上第二個例句,我們的立場是城市的發(fā)展對人們的影響是消極的,因為城市在規(guī)劃的時候大部分都忽略了人們的感受,這影響能積極的了嗎?

  3. In order to succeed, you should be more like others than be different from everyone else.

  顯然,我們這里可以直接套用第三個例句,也是持有相反態(tài)度,對于科學(xué)家來說,要想搞出點東西來,不能一味的模仿別人,還是有自己的個性,如果我們能夠舉兩個例子,第二個例子就可以用上面的句型引出,總比用in addition, 或者 another example is 要強很多吧。

  以上就是小編為大家分析點評和推薦的托福寫作滿分精選句式,希望能夠幫助大家補充更多實用好句子,提升考生的作文水平和得分。


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