托福寫作利用話題背景拿高分

　　題目：Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Students should spend at least one year working or traveling before they go to the university.

　　這個(gè)題目拿到手并不難，很多中國孩子甚至暗自欣喜，因?yàn)榭梢哉f大話了，首先，贊同的占了絕大多數(shù),比如：旅游可以broaden horizon，have a relaxation因?yàn)槠綍r(shí)的學(xué)習(xí)實(shí)在太辛苦了，生活也太無聊了，感覺中國孩子一直處于水深火熱之中，急需要gap year來拯救，而談到工作的好處，那也是一堆一堆的漂亮話，比如： cultivate communicational skills，teamwork spirit，leadership 等，讓具體說說怎么個(gè)培養(yǎng)這些技能了，又覺得思路拓展不開了。

　　當(dāng)然，還有不少一部分考生還會信誓旦旦的說自己從此就能找到摯愛的專業(yè)了，大學(xué)的指明燈從此亮起，感覺之前的十多年都白活了，gap year重要到不能沒有。 當(dāng)然也有較少一部分同學(xué)是反對的，大部分理由都是覺得gap了這一年，之前學(xué)的東西就容易忘記，走入社會就不想學(xué)習(xí)云云。

　　以上大家寫的如此雷同，枯燥，幼稚的原因又在哪里?因?yàn)槲覀冎袊⒆哟_實(shí)沒有像樣的gap year，因此必然很難寫出有道理深入人心的東西，那么我們就來普及一下這個(gè)話題的背景。

　　大家可能不清楚，gap year在國外確實(shí)很流行，以至于很多網(wǎng)站專門從事gap year的中介。

　　先做介紹：Sandwiched between China and India, Nepal is at a crossroads of cultures and religions. Over 50 festivals are year are held in this enchanting country that you will be calling home for 5, 7 or 10 weeks.(在中國和印度之間, 尼泊爾正處于文化和宗教的十字路口。50多個(gè)節(jié)日是在這個(gè)迷人的國家舉行, 你將在未來的 5, 7 或10周把它作為你的家)

　　然后說你為啥要去做志愿者：Despite this, Nepal is the second poorest country in Asia, and many of the population lack access to basic resources. This was worsened after the 2015 earthquake which devastated rural communities. These factors heighten the need for your help in the country.(盡管如此, 尼泊爾是亞洲第二貧窮國家, 許多人口無法獲得基本資源。這在2015地震摧毀了農(nóng)村社區(qū)之后更加惡化。這些因素增加了你在這個(gè)國家的幫助的需要)

　　下面是你要做什么：What will I be doing?

　　A Raleigh expedition is a unique volunteering opportunity for 17 to 24 year olds. On a Raleigh expedition in Nepal, you will work on community projects and an exhilarating adventure trek.(Raleigh遠(yuǎn)征是一個(gè)對于17 至24歲的人來說獨(dú)特的志愿服務(wù)機(jī)會。在尼泊爾的羅利探險(xiǎn), 你將致力于社區(qū)項(xiàng)目和令人振奮的冒險(xiǎn)跋涉)

　　重點(diǎn)來了，具體事例，有血有肉有意義: Community: You will be working in rural communities devastated by the 2015 earthquake. You and your team will be working on a water and sanitation project. This could involve rebuilding infrastructure or talking to people about important sanitation issues. (社區(qū): 你將在2015地震摧毀的農(nóng)村社區(qū)工作。你和你的團(tuán)隊(duì)將致力于水和衛(wèi)生項(xiàng)目。這可能涉及重建基礎(chǔ)設(shè)施或與人們談?wù)撝匾沫h(huán)境衛(wèi)生問題。)

　　看看別人的旅游是啥，怎么培養(yǎng)技能?Adventure: Experience the ultimate adventure trek! For 19 days, you and your team will be trekking up to 12km a day, camping out every night and learning about the communities you pass by. You will be camping in the foothills of the Himalayas – some of the most exciting mountain ranges in the world. Everyone will get the opportunity to lead the group for the day developing your teamwork and leadership skills.( 探險(xiǎn): 體驗(yàn)終極探險(xiǎn)迷航!19天后, 你和你的團(tuán)隊(duì)將每天徒步 12km, 每天晚上露營, 了解你經(jīng)過的社區(qū)。你將在喜馬拉雅山腳下露營--世界上一些最激動人心的山脈。每個(gè)人都將有機(jī)會帶領(lǐng)團(tuán)隊(duì)的一天, 發(fā)展你的團(tuán)隊(duì)精神和領(lǐng)導(dǎo)能力。)

　　Why Raleigh?

　　可以寫作時(shí)候借鑒加抄襲了： On expedition you’ll make friends from around the world and develop skills for life. Raleigh International is a sustainable development charity with over 30 years’ experience. You’ll be joining a community of over 40,000 people who have volunteered with us before so you can be sure you’ll be in safe hands.(在探險(xiǎn)中, 你將結(jié)交來自世界各地的朋友, 培養(yǎng)生活技能。Raleigh國際是一個(gè)具有30年經(jīng)驗(yàn)的可持續(xù)發(fā)展慈善機(jī)構(gòu)。你將加入一個(gè)4萬多人的社區(qū), 他們曾經(jīng)自愿和我們在一起, 這樣你就可以確保你的安全。)

　　“To know that we’ve made such a lasting difference to thousands of lives and generations to come will stay with me in my heart forever.” Freya – volunteered in Nepal("要知道, 我們已經(jīng)對成千上萬的生命和世代產(chǎn)生了如此持久的影響, 將永遠(yuǎn)與我在我的心中。志愿者freya說)