托福寫作中的三種完美結尾方式

　　Some people believe that children’s leisure activities must be educational; otherwise they are a complete waste of time.Do you agree or disagree?Finally,I think it is also important to remember that children need to relax as well as work.If everything they do must have some educational or academic relevance,then they will soon get tired of studying altogether,which is the last thing parents would want.

　　兩句話，作者的態(tài)度很明確，學生不可能花所有的時間去學習，否則就會完全失去對學習的興趣，所以也應該給學生一些放松的時間。

　　二、回答問題

　　When a country develops its technology; the traditional skills and ways of life die out.It is pointless to try and keep them alive.

　　To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

　　In conclusion, without suggesting that all technology is necessarily good,I think it is by no means ‘ pointless’,in any way, to try to keep traditions alive with technology.We should not ignore technology,because it can be our friend and support our way of life.

　　這個結尾段落明確地提出了自己的觀點，不是所有的科技都是好的，但是科技也不是完全沒有用處的。

　　三、不要添加新的信息

　　Happiness is considered to be very important in life.

　　Why is it difficult to define? What factors are important in achieving happiness?Like self-awareness，this is also very difficult to achieve’but I think these are the two factors that may be the most important for achieving happiness.