2013年12月英語六級作文范文及點評匯總（滬江網(wǎng)校版）

1.Directions：

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay about the impact of information explosion by reffering to the saying "a wealth of information creates a poverty of attention". You can cite examples to illustrate your point and thenexplain what you can do to avoid being distracted by irrelevant information? You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

【點評】

本次作文主題圍繞“信息爆炸給大眾帶來的困擾”，難度較小。最近幾年六級作文題都是緊扣時代特征，實用性較強，不會導致考生無話可說、無理可講。

本題型還是按照三段式，第一段可從題中的諺語著手，引出論點。第二段主要辯證論點“信息爆炸反而給大眾帶來的注意力轉移、無法集中等”，可以舉出生活化的實例。第三段給出問題的解決方法。注意在寫作過程中要有理有據(jù)、條理清晰即可。

【參考例文】

Ways to Get Over Information Explosion

As a famous saying goes, “A wealth of information creates a poverty of attention”. Nowadays we are in the Information Age. Some people keep complaining about distraction by the information explosion.

Admittedly, the new information age has brought us so much convenience that we are allowed to get enough information just with a simple click sitting in front of the computers. Nevertheless, we are also confused, annoyed, distracted and upset by an incredibly large quantity of information. For example, when searching for something online, people are easily carried away by irrelevant information and forget their original plan. Besides, some information often turns out to be useless and is actually advertisement. Therefore, it can be time-consuming and troublesome to search information online.

Then what we can do to avoid being distracted by irrelevant information? Here I have some useful tips: Firstly, make a list of what you really want before your searching. This will help you to refuse some appealing, yet irrelevant information. Secondly, find some trustful and professional sources or websites and then save and categorize them. In this case, you can easily leave some ads and useless information behind.

2. Directions:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay on happiness by referring to the saying “Happiness is not the absence of problems, but the ability to deal with them.” You can cite examples to illustrate your point and then explain how you can develop your ability to deal with problems and be happy. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

【點評】

本次作文主題圍繞“幸福的源泉”，難度不大。雖然表面有些抽象，但根據(jù)題干意義還是可以迅速地將本文分成2-3部分：1.總述幸福產(chǎn)生源泉，不是沒有問題，而是處理問題的能力。2.闡述自身有哪些解決問題、保持幸福的方法。

Happiness – Go for it

In this long journey we call "life", everybody is in pursuit of happiness and has their own interpretation of happiness. An inspiring idea is that happiness is not the absence of problems, but the ability to deal with them, which reveals the very truth about happiness. It cannot be achieved through waiting, but only through striving.

There is no way that life always progresses as we wish. Problems may occur and we find ourselves in trouble, but it doesn't mean we are deprived of happiness. There are numerous examples for us to follow: disabled people overcoming obstacles, patients fighting against disease, poverty-stricken people achieving their dreams -- all these inspiring heroes. Their lives are definitely not problem-free, but they have found happiness by courageously solving problems.

Therefore, it is essential to develop the ability to deal with problems. We need to muster our courage and confidence to face the fact. Meanwhile, we need to find effective ways to cope with them.

In a word, if we stay strong and approach problems effectively, there will be no storm in life that we cannot weather. And after the storm, happiness is within our reach.

3. Directions:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the remark “the greatest use of life is to spend it for something that will outlast it.” You can give examples to illustrate your point and then explain what you will do to make your life more meaningful. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

【點評】

本次作文主題圍繞“有意義的生活”，由于本次主題有些抽象，難度稍大。以下是一條可行思路：1.由諺語引出話題，表述自己對生活的看法。2.引出具體例子，作為自己觀點的支撐。3.給出自己的行動方向，如何“過有意義的生活”。

Among all the highlighted topics, there is “how to live a meaning life?” Everyone has his or her own opinion. As the saying has it, “the greatest use of life is to spend it for something that will outlast it.” I cannot agree any more.

If our life is just to pursue something for ourselves, we will surely feel fruitless and meaningless when we grow old. From Steve Jobs’s bibliography, we can get that the people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do. Steve Jobs has brought a great many changes to our world. His life, although short, definitely outlast. That’s a life worth living.

Therefore, if there is a way to make my life meaningful, it should be to find something I’m interested in and also helpful to others or the whole society. Only in this way can I keep my passion throughout my life until I finally fulfil my life.