2011年12月英語(yǔ)四級(jí)作文范文（文都教育版）

【參考范文】
范文一：

“Where there is a will, there is way” is an old proverb which almost everyone knows, but not all understand it so well. Actually, it means that if you are really resolved to do something, no matter how difficult it might be, never give up.

In fact, strong will is a kind of good quality which successful people should own. A great man is always one who has a firm resolution and an inflexible spirit. One will never succeed all his life without a firm will to get the final victory. As a rule, great tasks are accomplished by men of strong will. For example, Dr. Sun Yatsen, the founder of the Republic of China, set the Chinese people free from the Manchurian rule through a long period of hard struggle. Many of his attempts failed and many of his followers were killed, but he had an inflexible spirit and stuck to his cause. Finally, he made the revolution of 1911 a success. The same is true of men in all walks of life.

It is quite obvious that there is nothing difficult in the world, if you make up your mind to do it, you will certainly accomplish your end. That stands to reason.So as for students like us, we should have a good attitude towards failure. Facing with difficulties and failures, keep heads up and never give up. Besides, we should make full preparation, though strong will help us overcome the difficulties, it is not for person who has no preparation.

范文二：

There is an old saying: where there is a will, there is a way. It tells us that a strong will is the most essential quality that anyone who wants to achieve success. It can contribute a lot to one’s success.

Although“All roads lead to Rome”, none of them is completely smooth. Our life is filled with obstacles which may make us feel so hopeless that we may choose to give up. At the crucial moment, strong will helps a lot. As a matter of fact, the ability to work through difficult situation and unfortunate events with strong will can make one stronger and more capable. In other words, if we want to realize life’s goal, we must keep forging ahead with strong consciousness.

From what has been discussed above, we can see that the establishment of tough determination is of great importance to everyone. With a strong will, including our knowledge, we will be able to deal with any situation in our life. Whatever we do, as long as we stick to and do not give up easily, we will realize the goal at last.

作文解析：
文都名師：方明

12月的四級(jí)作文要求寫一篇意志和成功的關(guān)系的短文。

首先，這個(gè)題目沒(méi)有任何題材范圍上的突破，和大學(xué)生的日常生活和成長(zhǎng)有關(guān)。

第二，這個(gè)題目其實(shí)很有利于考生的發(fā)揮。可以引用名人名言來(lái)開(kāi)篇，也可以引用成功的實(shí)例或者自己的經(jīng)歷加以佐證。但是要注意，情緒渲染點(diǎn)到為止，否則，不僅不會(huì)打動(dòng)閱卷老師，反而有不夠縝密和結(jié)構(gòu)松散之嫌。

第三，四級(jí)作文要求大家應(yīng)該體現(xiàn)出亮點(diǎn)，體現(xiàn)出英語(yǔ)語(yǔ)言水平，方式很多，比如非常用詞替換常用詞，特殊句式，從句的使用等等，。就今年12月這個(gè)題目而言，可以用一個(gè)虛擬語(yǔ)氣的句子，“如果…….就（不）……..”。比如在談曾經(jīng)的因?yàn)橛袌?jiān)強(qiáng)意志而成功的一個(gè)例子時(shí)，可以用Had I not done sth，I would have這樣的句式。

第四，不要聰明反被聰明誤，有同學(xué)會(huì)論述意志力的重要性，然后“辯證地”談只有意志力也不行等等。這會(huì)削弱自己主題的表達(dá)，而不是什么“證全面”。

文都名師：徐可風(fēng)

本次四級(jí)作文探討的是最近的一個(gè)熱點(diǎn)話題一——意志力與成功的關(guān)系。隨著社會(huì)競(jìng)爭(zhēng)越來(lái)越激烈，青年面對(duì)的困難也越來(lái)越多。“放棄還是堅(jiān)持”成為我們不得不面對(duì)的一個(gè)選擇。

按照四級(jí)作文的要求，考生在第一段時(shí)應(yīng)該總述現(xiàn)象并引出話題。有點(diǎn)考生不知道應(yīng)該如何展開(kāi)描述“什么是成功”，其實(shí)描述就可以舉例，舉身邊的例子。“成功”不是抽象的，是具體的，你可以說(shuō)“想成為科學(xué)家”“百萬(wàn)富翁”，想成為“超級(jí)巨星”。甚至于《失戀33天》的王小仙能忘記劈腿的前男友，這也是一種成功。所以，描述一定要具體，否則就寫不下去了。

第二段考生可以從“堅(jiān)強(qiáng)的意志的重要性”這個(gè)角度展開(kāi)。例如，成功的路上肯定會(huì)遇到困難，而克服困難需要堅(jiān)強(qiáng)的意志?！而欓T宴》看了嗎？劉邦從幾千人馬干掉項(xiàng)羽幾十萬(wàn)人馬，最后取得成功，這里面就需要堅(jiān)強(qiáng)的意志?？粗约盒膼?ài)的女人天天和別人在一起，沒(méi)有堅(jiān)強(qiáng)的意志，劉邦童鞋能扛住嗎？不可能。這可不是一般人能做到的，不信你試試看，hold不住的。

第三點(diǎn)考生可以下個(gè)結(jié)論。再次強(qiáng)調(diào)堅(jiān)強(qiáng)意志對(duì)于成功的必要性。和文章開(kāi)頭“首尾呼應(yīng)”。

整篇作文只要考生審好題，列出相應(yīng)點(diǎn)，相信作文分?jǐn)?shù)會(huì)不錯(cuò)。