2011年6月英語(yǔ)四級(jí)真題作文范文(滬江外教版1)

Online shopping has been a boon to many industries and companies looking to expand their markets. Also, it’s convenient for shoppers who are too busy to leave the house. However, in some cases nothing can replace a true face to face shopping experience.
Internet shopping is convenient for the mothers who spend all day doing house chores and for the fathers who work a full-time job. On the other hand, there are limits to shopping online, for example: guessing the correct size of clothing on a computer screen can be very frustrating.
For the busy mother and father, online shopping is a very useful and convenient tool. But, there are instances, like clothes shopping, where nothing beats the real thing.

點(diǎn)評(píng)：
作者在第一段描述了網(wǎng)購(gòu)作為一種時(shí)尚給大家的生活帶來(lái)了便利，然后話鋒一轉(zhuǎn)，說(shuō)網(wǎng)購(gòu)仍然取代不了面對(duì)面的購(gòu)物交流。

第二段主要還是從正反兩方面分析了網(wǎng)購(gòu)的優(yōu)勢(shì)和不足，以此描述大家對(duì)網(wǎng)購(gòu)的不同反應(yīng)。

第三段作者表明了自己的觀點(diǎn)，對(duì)網(wǎng)購(gòu)的便利和不足之處都做了描述。

綜合來(lái)講，本篇文章觀點(diǎn)明確，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)地道，有不少閃光詞匯，但是，內(nèi)容深度上來(lái)講還有些欠缺，另外，最后一部分表達(dá)個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)，和第二段稍有重復(fù)?？忌枰⒁庥^點(diǎn)的清晰，不宜模棱兩可。