新東方6級訓(xùn)練寫作2
實例二 99年6月真題
Reading Selectively Or Extensively?
Outline: 1.有人認為讀書要有選擇
2.有人認為應(yīng)當博覽群書
3.我的想法
①11分
When it comes to reading, some people think that reading selectively is a good way, but some other people do not agree with them, they think that reading extensively is better.
Those people, who think that reading selectively is better, believe that good books are as many as bad books. Those good books can give us pleasure and knowledge, while those bad books can only lead us to the wrong way. So, they suggest that we should only choose the good books to read and never touch the bad books.
But, the other people, who hold that reading extensively is better, think that one kind of books can only give us one aspect of knowledge. Even the best book only contains one field of information. So, they can easily come to the conclusion that “to know more, to read more”. So they believe that reading extensively is better.
To my point, we should choose good books to read and read good books as many as possible. By this way, we can increase the quality and quantity of reading.
②5分
I think reading not only selectively but also extensively. Because the two sides are not contradict. Our time is limited. So we can not read every book in the world. However, we will not be interested in every book. We should read those books may be useful to ours, read those books which we like. But those books which we choose must be extensively so it can give ours all kinds of knowledge, news and so on, it also make ours become a wise man. On the one hand reading selectively let ours not waste our time which it is limited. Moreover it can emphasis among all books that we can read. On the other hand reading extensively can deal with all kinds of need in our life. They are all useful to ours.
失分原因：分段太少，語法錯誤太多
③2分
Most people thought that read books should have been selective. But others believed reading extensively was correction.
Selective books or reading extensively?
Sure, you can choice one from previous ideas,
on one hand, There are too book to read for us. We should choose those which we interested, and it would be helpful for us.
On another hand. Someone’s interesting was wide. Each book could bring you specific contain we couldn’t reading at only one level.
I confirmed all of these ideas were good but weren’t wise.
As a reader, the main task is to discover more and more books the second task is to held some which wonderful and helpful for us. Don’t treat these books with reckless abandon.
The best technology of reading is connect.
失分原因：分段太多，語法錯誤太多
④14分
How should we read? Should we read selectively or extensively? Everyone has his own view.
Some people think we should read selectively. They argue that with the development of modern science and technology, more and more books are published. It is impossible for us to read all the books. What’s more, there are many bad books that are poisonous to our mind, and we shouldn’t read them. Since we can’t read all the books and we shouldn’t read bad books, we must read selectively.
But others may not agree, they emphasize that today's society is not what it was. If one man has many kinds of knowledge, he will have more chances to succeed. If a man knows much in one field but knows nothing in other fields, he may be useless. Since we must have many kinds of knowledge, we must read extensively.
Who’s right? I think both of them have something right. But I think we should read extensively first. We should read books in many fields, and read selectively in one field.
⑤8分
Some people think reading shall be chosen. Because some books are good to human beings and some books are harmful to people.
Some people think that men should read books widely. Because wide reading can help man get much knowledge. And man can use it to change the world.
It is my point that reading must be selectively. Because reading is important to man. Some books can help man but some books can lead some people to crime. It can be seen in the newspapers and watched on TV. We can make full use of some good books and gain more useful knowledge. It can make our life more beautiful. We must give up those unhelpful books. They are not good to us. Reading them is wasting time and money. So reading selectively is an important part in reading.
失分原因：結(jié)構(gòu)失調(diào)，表述方式單一
典型的對比觀點選擇題的文章邏輯結(jié)構(gòu)：
（啟）Paragraph I：（1）引出將要評論的事物或者是觀點；
（2）簡明扼要的提出人們在這個問題上的兩種不同看法。
（承）Paragraph II：（1）提出一種觀點或優(yōu)點；
（2）本段的支持性分論點；
（3）本段總結(jié)（可以省略）。
（轉(zhuǎn)）Paragraph III：（1）承上啟下的過渡句；
（2）提出另一種觀點或缺點；
（3）本段的支持性分論點
（4）本段總（可以省略）。
（合）Paragraph IV：（1）平衡兩種看法；
（2）給出自己的觀點。
④14分
How should we read? Should we read selectively or extensively? Everyone has his own view.（啟）
注：1.第一句提出問題，第二句提出兩種見解
Some people think we should read selectively. They argue that with the development of modern science and technology, more and more books are published. It is impossible for us to read all the books. What’s more, there are many bad books that are poisonous to our mind, and we shouldn’t read them. Since we can’t read all the books and we shouldn’t read bad books, we must read selectively.（承）
注：1.本段總分總結(jié)構(gòu)
2.they argue that = they think that
3.with the development of...
4.what's more 遞進關(guān)系，moreover
But others may not agree, they emphasize that today's society is not what it was. If one man has many kinds of knowledge, he will have more chances to succeed. If a man knows much in one field but knows nothing in other fields, he may be useless. Since we must have many kinds of knowledge, we must read extensively.（轉(zhuǎn)）
注：1.But 轉(zhuǎn)折詞
2.they emphasize that = they think that
3.today's society is not what it was 現(xiàn)代社會今昔非比
4.許多知識 a wide range of/a large scope of/much；獲取知識 acquire/get knowledge
5.knows nothing→little；he may be useless→he may not be of great use to the society 后者比前者更委婉
Who’s right? I think both of them have something right. But I think we should read extensively first. We should read books in many fields, and read selectively in one field.（合）
①11分
When it comes to reading, some people think that reading selectively is a good way, but some other people do not agree with them, they think that reading extensively is better.
Those people, who think that reading selectively is better, believe that good books are as many as bad books. Those good books can give us pleasure and knowledge, while those bad books can only lead us to the wrong way. So, they suggest that we should only choose the good books to read and never touch the bad books.
注：1.“people, who”應(yīng)去掉逗號，改為非限制定語從句。
2.they suggest that = they think that
3.touch 碰，閃光點詞匯，如教材P7：shoulder the responsibility of doing sth. 肩負起責任
But, the other people, who hold that reading extensively is better, think that one kind of books can only give us one aspect of knowledge. Even the best book only contains one field of information. So, they can easily come to the conclusion that “to know more, to read more”. So they believe that reading extensively is better.
To my point, we should choose good books to read and read good books as many as possible. By this way, we can increase the quality and quantity of reading.
Directions: Write a composition about 120/150 words based on the following outline:
1）當前社會上存在許多不誠實的現(xiàn)象
2）誠實利人利己，做人應(yīng)該誠實
