中考英語滿分作文:寫一封電子郵件（應(yīng)用軟件）

 寫一封電子郵件（應(yīng)用軟件）

假如你是李華,在網(wǎng)上看到英國Britech公司為正在開發(fā)的一款提高英語寫作能力的應(yīng)用軟件(app)征集網(wǎng)友建議。請根據(jù)網(wǎng)上的征集信息,用英語給該公司寫一封電子郵件。

IDEAS NEEDED

Britech is nowdesigning an app that helps learners with their English writing. The app is tohelp learners explore ideas, organize them and write them down. Your ideas areneeded!

Here’s what to do:

Write to shareyour ideas! Feel free to be creative!

Please let usknow:

●What’s the nameof the app?

●What problem doesthe app solve?

●What does the appdo?

Contact us [email protected]

注意:

1.不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名和姓名。

2.文中應(yīng)包含所有要點(diǎn),并適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),使行文連貫。

3.詞數(shù)110左右,短文首句僅供選擇使用,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

【參考范文】

Dear Sir orMadam, 

Thanks fordesigning an app for English writing. I’d like to share my ideas here. Couldits name be “Writing Made Easy”? 

Many of us havedifficulty in writing. We don’t know how to organize ideas, use proper words,and so on. I hope it can solve these problems.

Here is my adviceon what the app does. First, it should provide some reading materials. The morewe read, the better we write. Second, the app should have an online course sothat we can develop our writing skills. Third, there should be an e-teacher whocan correct mistakes and offer suggestions.

尊敬的先生/女士:

謝謝你設(shè)計(jì)了一個(gè)英語寫作應(yīng)用程序。我想在這里分享一下我的想法。它的名字會不會是“讓寫作變得簡單”?

我們許多人在寫作方面有困難。我們不知道如何組織思想，使用合適的詞語，等等。我希望它能解決這些問題。

以下是我對這款應(yīng)用的建議。首先，它應(yīng)該提供一些閱讀材料。我們讀得越多，寫得就越好。其次，應(yīng)用程序應(yīng)該有一個(gè)在線課程，這樣我們可以提高我們的寫作技能。第三，應(yīng)該有一個(gè)可以糾正錯(cuò)誤和提供建議的電子教師。