中考英語作文：Friendship (點評)

In our daily life, if we get on harmoniously with our friends, we’ll feel more joyous. But we’ll feel lonely without friends. When our friends feel upset or get ill, we shouldn’t ignore them or look down upon them. On the contrary, we ought to calm them down, show our love and concern to them and try our best to help them overcome the hardships. Sometimes we may have some misunderstandings or disagreements with our friends, thus we had better have a discussion with them and try to accept their good ideas instead of quarreling with them. As long as we can follow these good suggestions, we’ll find it easy to make more friends。

小編點評：本文中含有超綱重點詞匯、亮點短語及句型。同學(xué)們閱讀完后可以記錄下來，運(yùn)用到自己的寫作中，以提高寫作水平。

重點詞匯分析：

Harmoniously：融洽地

Overcome：戰(zhàn)勝

Misunderstandings：誤解

亮點短語分析：

get on harmoniously with sb:與某人相處融洽

look down upon sb: 看不起某人，小看某人

On the contrary: 相反…

Ought to do sth: 應(yīng)該做某事

try one’s best to do sth: 盡某人最大的努力做某事

had better do sth: 最好做某事

亮點句型分析：

if、as long as 引導(dǎo)條件狀語從句；

when 引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句

使用On the contrary表達(dá)相反的觀點，起到連接上下文作用