雅思寫作大作文高分范文：幸福與財富有關(guān)嗎?

　　Some people think personal happiness is closely related to economic success, while others believe that this depends on other factors. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

　　雅思寫作題目講解

　　雅思雅思寫作題目的范圍非常廣，其中的雅思寫作題目難易程度梯度相差比較大。不過雅思寫作題目的難易程度也是一個相對的概念。考生只要對于一些雅思寫作題目的素材有些積累，就能比較從容的應(yīng)付相關(guān)的雅思寫作題目。此題就是一個例子。

　　如果一方的觀點過于絕對，出現(xiàn)類似“every”“all”“the only”,等關(guān)鍵字，建議考生在最后個段落中不同意此方觀點。此題一方觀點中“directly”過于絕對。但即便如此，考生需要用一個段落闡述快樂部分取決于經(jīng)濟上的成就。

　　可供參考的雅思寫作素材：

　　既然說是可供參考，就說明只是一家之言。呵呵。期望的高分的同學務(wù)必重視“切題”“論述的連貫一直”。另外，對比的句子在雅思考官滿分雅思寫作范文中出現(xiàn)的頻率非常高，下面的英文刻意多用了些類似的表達。這里給出的英文主要供期望寫作7+的同學參考。期望5.5-6分的同學大體上做到不跑題太遠，語法錯誤不能太明顯，甚至多用點模板都可以。

　　第二段： (論述為什么經(jīng)濟上的成功在一些程度上是人快樂。)

　　人們對生活的滿意程度部分取決于一個人的經(jīng)濟上的成就。我們生活在一個世界里，身在其中的絕大部分人將一個人的賺錢能力同一個人的社會地位相等同。當一個人必須經(jīng)?？紤]如何能找到體面的工作來緩解家庭經(jīng)濟壓力時，他無法真正享受生活。當一個人能在一天賺的錢比他人一個月轉(zhuǎn)得更多時，他更有可能獲得別人的尊重，這種尊重is widely thought to be closely related to one’s sense of fulfillment.

　　People’s contentment with life is partly determined by their economic achievement, which could be explained by the fact that we are living in a world where most people associate one’s ability to make money with one’ social status. An individual, constantly having to consider how to relieve his family of economic burden, is deprived of the chance to enjoy life. And a worker capable of earning within a month what others cannot earn within a year is more likely to gain respect from others，and this sense of being esteemed is widely thought to be related to one’s sense of fulfillment.

　　第三段：(論述其他因素同樣影響一個人對生活的滿意度。這些因素包括：一個人是否有歸屬感， 工作中的成就感，認同感。)

　　人們對于生活的看法受經(jīng)濟生成就的影響不盡然意味著他是唯一的因素。一個人的歸屬人感同樣重要。人們都生活在一個社交網(wǎng)中，這個社交網(wǎng)使得人意識到被他人認同，使得他們意識到自己屬于哪一個群體。一個抽不出足夠時間同家人朋友在一起的人不能被稱作是幸福的人，即使它賺取了足夠的錢。此外，當人意識到自己所做的工作能給他帶來價值，這種快樂同樣無法用金錢衡量。

　　However, economic success is not necessarily the only criterion for measuring how people feel about life. Their sense of identity is also a decisive factor for their happiness. We are living in a social net, which allows us to be approved by others and to have a knowledge of which community we belong to. An individual unable to set aside enough time for family union would fail to feel satisfied, despite the great wealth he could create. Besides, recognition that what one is doing could contribute to others also brings happiness, which could not be acquired by coins.