雅思大作文議論文高分范文解析：家庭話題

　　Children should always follow their parents'advice.

　　To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

　　Key words analysis

　　children: 孩子們，是child的復(fù)數(shù)形式

　　follow: 遵從

　　advice: 建議，是一個不可數(shù)名詞，如要表示一條建議，則說a piece of advice

　　Argument:

　　這是屬于議論文中的argument類型，通常會在agree或disagree之間進(jìn)行選擇。但是該題特別提到說to what extent do you agree or disagree，那么我們最好是能夠討論到這個時間的兩個方面，然后給出自己的意見。

　　Possible reasons:

　　孩子的經(jīng)歷較少，遇到事情可能不知道如何處理，爸媽的建議很重要

　　孩子很多時候沒辦法看清一些事情，需要父母分析問題

　　有的時候，孩子需要獨(dú)立思考的空間，畢竟他們才最了解自己所需要的

　　Model Essay 1 – Part 1

　　Introduction

　　Some people say that children should always follow their parents'advice; others claim that this is not always right. I believe that children should follow their parents' advice when they are young,but they should become more independent when they are older.

　　Main body 1

　　Young children do not know the difference between right and wrong, and a parent is the best person to teach them this.For example, a young child does not know that it is wrong to take things that do not belong to them. Parents can also teach children about dangers, both in the home and outside.

　　Model Essay 1 – Part 2

　　Main body 2

　　However, when children grow older they should pay less attention to their parents. This is because parents might tell a child which career to choose, and this should be the child's decision.Parents sometimes want to tell their children how to live, but when they are grown up. they can decide for themselves. If a child doesn't make their own decisions, he or she might grow up to be less independent and strong.

　　Conclusion

　　In conclusion, parents need to give young children advice on morals and safety, but not on how to live when they are older.