劍13Test4小作文9分范文賞析：體育館對(duì)比圖

　　

 

　　The plans below show the layout of a university's sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

　　劍橋雅思小作文解析

　　關(guān)鍵在于把圖中變化較大和變化沒那么大的部分區(qū)分開。

　　變化小的部分：

　　這實(shí)際上也是 sports center 的核心部分，其中只有 gym 變成了大約2倍，其他部分沒有變化。

　　不會(huì)表達(dá)的信息：這塊區(qū)域，叫做 the sports centre building 或者 the main building

　　此外，這個(gè)區(qū)域的 changing room 和 seatings，共同叫做 swimming facilities

　　如果覺得文章字?jǐn)?shù)過多，可以只寫 swimming facilities

　　容易忽視的信息

　　gym 沿著 sports center 的北邊，stretch along the north side，gym 擴(kuò)張的方向是向東

　　2變化大的部分

　　按照編號(hào)的順序

　　1. 西側(cè)的 outdoor courts 變成了 lersure pool

　　2. 東側(cè)的 outdoor courts 變成了 sports hall 和 dance studios

　　3. 前門的區(qū)域(包含 reception)，新增了 sports shop 和 cafe

　　以下范文，不是按照傳統(tǒng)的“一幅圖分一組”的方式寫的，而是按照“變化大和變化小的區(qū)域各分一組”寫的。

　　劍橋雅思小作文范文：

　　The upper map shows the plan of a university sports centre as it is now and the lower map shows the same building once it has been redeveloped.

　　主體段1：變化的總體介紹

　　Overall, the existing 25-metre pool and surrounding facilities will remain largely unchanged. However, the building will be substantially expanded by means of the addition of a leisure pool and a range of other new facilities.

　　主體段2：中間區(qū)域

　　Currently, the sports centre building consists only of a 25m pool, related swimming facilities and a gym that stretches along the north side. While the planned new sports centre will occupy around twice the current floorspace, these facilities will remain unchanged except that the gym will be significantly extended to the east.

　　主體段3：周圍區(qū)域

　　Either side of the building at present, there are outdoor courts which will make way for a new leisure pool to the west of the main building, and a sports hall and two dance studios to the east. To the south of the 25m pool, the current reception area will be enlarged to accommodate a sports shop and café, on the west and east sides respectively. Finally, new changing rooms will be built in the south-west and south-east corners.

　　詞匯解釋

　　floor space

　　floor space, or floorspace is the area (measured as square feet or square metres) taken up by a building or part of it 占地面積