雅思寫(xiě)作范文：經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展是判斷國(guó)家是否成功的唯一標(biāo)準(zhǔn)

雅思寫(xiě)作話題：Economic progress is one way to measure a country's success. Some people believe there are other factors. What other factors should be considered? Do you think that any one of them is more important than the others?

提綱：

economy：

提高大眾生活水平

為發(fā)展社會(huì)其他方面提供支持

other factors：

教育、治安、健康、文化、環(huán)境、民主...

most important：

education

范文：

A successful country, the definition of which though does not gain a consensus, means more than just one factor. (定語(yǔ)從句，插入語(yǔ))

Economy is widely recognized as a crucial criterion to judge a nation because it is a sound economic development that determines the living standard and that provides financial resources to other domains of a society including education, scientific research and public health. In addition, there is a close association between wealth and low crime rate. (被動(dòng)句，原因狀語(yǔ)從句，強(qiáng)調(diào)句，非謂語(yǔ))

However, economic status is not the only consideration in the judgment of a nation and there are a variety of other elements to define an ideal society. A healthy natural environment would make sure that our next generation can keep living on the earth. Healthy lifestyles make healthy and happy workers who are able to make contribution to his/her community. In addition, dynamic and characteristic culture and democraticpolitics is universally desirable and is seen as a symbol of progress and civilization. (并列句，there be 句型，定語(yǔ)從句，賓語(yǔ)從句)

Among these factors, I believe that education is the fundamental one to judge whether a country is successful or not. The major reason is that education determines whether a country can succeed economically in a sustainable way. Without education of high quality, there would be deficient labour force of high quality to ensure a long termeconomic boom which in modern high-tech and information society requires much morewell-educated professionals with the spirit of innovation and creation than in the industrial society. Education also makes incredible contribution to other importantsectors. It helps lower the crime rate and increase public awareness to the environment, health and politics. (賓語(yǔ)從句，表語(yǔ)從句，雙重否定句，定語(yǔ)從句，比較句型)

詞匯拓展：

consensus n.一致同意

definition n.定義

criterion n.評(píng)價(jià)標(biāo)準(zhǔn)

dynamic adj.有活力的

comprise v.包含

democratic politics 民主政治

civilization n.文明

deficient adj.缺乏的

economic boom 經(jīng)濟(jì)繁榮

sector n.部門

innovation n.創(chuàng)新

public awareness 大眾意識(shí)

ideal adj.理想的