雅思小作文：99%的考生都會(huì)犯的錯(cuò)誤

　　一般沒(méi)有had a decrease/ increase的說(shuō)法，一般是saw a decrease/increase

　　Increased, decreased, declined 這些上升和下降的詞都沒(méi)有被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)

　　當(dāng)the number, the amount, the figure， the proportion做句子的主語(yǔ)的時(shí)候，不能用account for

　　The proportion of 后面不能加句子，譬如說(shuō) the proportion of people worked in the healthcare sector是錯(cuò)的，要寫(xiě)成the proportion of people who worked in the healthcare sector

　　The amount不能替換the number

　　Ratio和rate一般不能替代proportion和percentage

　　Picture 不能替換graph 或者chart

　　不要用定語(yǔ)從句讀數(shù)據(jù)，譬如說(shuō) the crime rate in the US was highest, which was 0.3%. 這里的which was 直接省略。

　　結(jié)尾段一般不寫(xiě)in conclusion

　　結(jié)尾段不能寫(xiě)數(shù)據(jù)

　　一般是compared with，而不是comparing with

　　Followed by后面要寫(xiě)名詞，而且這個(gè)名詞要和主句的主語(yǔ)性質(zhì)差不多

　　Reach 讀數(shù)據(jù)的時(shí)候不能加to或者at, 直接加數(shù)據(jù)就可以