高考英語滿分作文:2020年山東卷2

2020年山東卷

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TheMeredith family lived in a small community. As the economy was in decline, somepeople in the town had lost their jobs. Many of their families were strugglingto make ends meet. People were trying to help each other meet the challenges.

Mrs.Meredith was a most kind and thoughtful woman. She spent a great deal of timevisiting the poor. She knew they had problems, and they needed all kinds ofhelp. When she had time, she would bring food and medicine to them.

Onemorning she told her children about a family she had visited the day before.There was a man sick in bed, his wife, who took care of him and could not goout to work, and their little boy. The little boy -his name was Bernard-hadinterested her very much.

“Iwish you could see him,” she said to her own children, John, Harry, and Clara.“He is such a help to his mother. He wants very much to earn some money, but Idon't see what he can do.”

Aftertheir mother left the room, the children sat thinking about Bernard. “I wish wecould help him to earn money,” said Clara. “His family is suffering so much.”

“Sodo I,” said Harry. “We really should do something to assist them.”

Forsome moments, John said nothing, but, suddenly, he sprang to his feet andcried, “I have a great idea! I have a solution that we can all help accomplish(完成).”

Theother children also jumped up all attention. When John had an idea, it was sureto be a good one. “I tell you what we can do,” said John. “You know that bigbox of corn Uncle John sent us? Well, we can make popcorn(爆米花),and put it into paper bags, and Bernard can take it around to the houses andsell it.”

梅瑞狄斯一家住在一個小社區(qū)。

隨著經(jīng)濟的衰退，鎮(zhèn)上有些人失去了工作。

他們中的許多家庭都在努力維持收支平衡。

人們試圖互相幫助迎接挑戰(zhàn)。

梅瑞狄斯太太是一個非常善良和體貼的女人。

她花了很多時間拜訪窮人。

她知道他們有問題，他們需要各種幫助。

當(dāng)她有時間的時候，她會帶食物和藥品給他們。

一天早上，她給孩子們講了她前一天去過的一個家庭。

有一個男人臥病在床，他的妻子不能出去工作，只能照顧他，還有他們的小兒子。

那個小男孩——他的名字叫伯納——使她非常感興趣。

“我希望你們能看到他?！彼龑ψ约旱暮⒆蛹s翰、哈利和克拉拉說。

“他是他媽媽的好幫手。

他很想掙錢，但我看不出他能做什么?！?/p>

母親離開房間后，孩子們坐著想著伯納。

“我希望我們能幫他掙錢，”克拉拉說。

“他的家人遭受了太多的痛苦?！?/p>

“我也是?！惫f。

“我們真的應(yīng)該做點什么來幫助他們?！?/p>

好一會兒，約翰什么也沒說，突然，他跳起來喊道:“我有一個好主意!

我有一個解決方案,我們都可以幫助完成(完成)。”

其他的孩子也都跳了起來。

當(dāng)約翰有了一個主意，這肯定是一個好主意。

“我告訴你我們能做什么，”約翰說。

“你知道約翰叔叔寄給我們的那一大箱玉米嗎?”

我們可以讓爆米花(爆米花),把它放到紙袋,伯納德可以把它周圍的房子,賣掉它?！?/p>

注意:

1. 續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右:

2. 請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

    When Mrs. Meredith heard of John's idea,she thought it was a good one, too.

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    With everything ready, Bernard started outon his new business.

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【滿分范文】

When Mrs. Meredith heard ofJohn’s idea, she thought it was a good one, too.So,they went to the local supermarket together. They bought a bag of corn and somespecial bags for popcorn. When they got home, they made a lot of popcorn andput it in the special bags. With the popcorn, they went to Bernard’s home. Theytold Bernard how to sell the popcorn. Bernard and his parents were very grateful.And the Meredith family also felt very happy to help this family.

Witheverything ready, Bernard started out on his new business.Hetook the popcorn around to the houses and sold all his popcorn. He earned a lotof money. Then, he wanted to be self-dependent. Therefore, he asked Mrs. Meredithto teach him how to make popcorn. After that, not only did he sell popcorn, buthe also added cream and salt to the popcorn to make it taste better. Bernardgrew up to be a remarkable man. He did not forget the help of Meredith’sfamily, and he also did what he could to help those in need.

當(dāng)梅雷迪思太太聽說約翰的主意時，她也覺得這是個好主意。

于是，他們一起去了當(dāng)?shù)氐某小?/p>

他們買了一袋玉米和一些專門裝爆米花的袋子。

當(dāng)他們回到家，他們做了很多爆米花，把它放在特殊的袋子里。

帶著爆米花，他們?nèi)チ瞬{的家。

他們告訴伯納怎么賣爆米花。

伯納和他的父母非常感激。

Meredith一家也很高興能幫助這個家庭。

一切準(zhǔn)備就緒后，伯納開始了他的新事業(yè)。

他帶著爆米花去各家各戶，把所有的爆米花都賣了。

他掙了很多錢。

然后，他想自立。

因此，他請梅瑞狄斯太太教他如何做爆米花。

在那之后，他不僅賣爆米花，而且還在爆米花里加入奶油和鹽，使它味道更好。

伯納德成長為一個非凡的人。

他沒有忘記梅雷迪思家人的幫助，他也盡自己所能幫助那些需要幫助的人。