高考英語滿分作文:2016 全國卷 I

2016 全國卷 I

假定你是李華，暑假想去一家外貿(mào)公司兼職，已寫好申請(qǐng)書和個(gè)人簡歷（resume）。給外教MS Jenkins寫信，請(qǐng)她幫你修改所附材料的文字和格式（format）。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右;2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，已使行文連貫。

【范文】

DearMS Jenkins,

I’m Li Hua. Iplan to take a part-time job in a foreign company during the summer holiday. Ihave already filled in the application form and had my resume ready for it.However, I am not sure about the words and format. Therefore, I am writing toask for your help and professional advice. Would you please spare some time toread through the materials attached? Would you mind finding out the mistakes interms of words and format? Besides, I’d like you to correct the mistakes foundin the materials and format.

    I would much appreciate it if you could dome a favor. I am looking forward to your reply.

     Yours,

     Li Hua

(譯文)

親愛的詹金斯小姐,

我是李華。我計(jì)劃暑假期間在一家外企做兼職。我已經(jīng)填好了申請(qǐng)表，也準(zhǔn)備好了個(gè)人簡歷。然而，我不確定的文字和格式。因此，我寫信請(qǐng)求您的幫助和專業(yè)的建議。您能抽出點(diǎn)時(shí)間通讀一下附件中的材料嗎?請(qǐng)你幫我找出用詞和格式上的錯(cuò)誤好嗎?另外，我希望你能改正材料和格式上的錯(cuò)誤。

如果你能幫我一個(gè)忙，我將不勝感激。期待您的回復(fù)。

你的,

李華