六級高分作文_工作與娛樂

　工作與娛樂

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay on working and having fun by referring to the saying “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy .” You can cite examples to illustrate your point. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

審題立意

1. 導(dǎo)語解讀：要求考生根據(jù)“只工作不玩耍，聰明孩子也變傻”這句話寫一篇關(guān)于“工作和娛樂”的文章，可以舉例說明。

2. 文章立意：工作和娛樂既彼此對立又緊密聯(lián)系，要處理好工作和娛樂之間的關(guān)系，不能只工作不娛樂，也不能只娛樂不工作。

寫作思路

1. 第一段指出工作和娛樂既彼此對立又緊密聯(lián)系，引出主題。

2. 第二段分別從工作和娛樂兩方面對主題進(jìn)行闡述，說明二者缺一不可。

3. 第三段呼應(yīng)主題，再一次指出二者是人們生活中必不可少的部分。

參考范文

As the saying goes “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.” This shows having fun is essential to life. Working and having fun, on the one hand stand opposite to each other, and on the other hand are closely linked. People should balance the relationship between them and shouldn’t live without either of them. 1

For one thing 2 , working is a means of making a living. Working is the need to realize one’s personal value... Working plays an important role in living. However, people should work moderately and shouldn’t work without having fun. If people work without having fun, they will live under great pressure. They can’t relax their body and mind, which will affect their health. For another 2 , appropriate entertainment is necessary, but all play and no work is also wrong. All play and no work makes people lazy, decadent, and lost, which in the long run will ruin them.

In conclusion 3 , working and having fun are two indispensable parts in one’s life. Without either of them, people will live an incomplete life. So keeping balance between the two is very important. Only with the combination of the two can people live a happy and colorful life. 4

俗話說“只工作不玩耍，聰明孩子也變傻”，可見，生活中不能缺少娛樂。工作和娛樂既彼此對立又緊密聯(lián)系，要處理好工作和娛樂之間的關(guān)系，不能只工作不娛樂，也不能只娛樂不工作。

首先，工作是謀生的手段，工作是實現(xiàn)個人價值的需要……工作在生活中扮演著重要的角色。但是工作要適度，不能只工作不娛樂。如果只有工作沒有娛樂，人們會生活在極大的壓力之下，身心得不到放松，他們的健康會受到影響。其次，適當(dāng)?shù)膴蕵肥潜匾模遣豢芍粖蕵凡还ぷ?。只娛樂不工作會讓人變得懶惰、頹廢、迷失自我。這樣發(fā)展下去會毀掉整個人生。

總之，工作和娛樂是生活中兩個不可缺少的部分。缺少任何一方，人們的生活都會不完整。因此，平衡二者之間的關(guān)系是很重要的。只有把兩者結(jié)合起來，人們才能過上幸福多彩的生活。

范文點評

1. 首段末尾給出文章主題：工作和娛樂二者缺一不可。

2. 從只工作不娛樂和只娛樂不工作兩個方面論證主題。

3. 通過總結(jié)，深化主題。

4. 結(jié)尾句通過提煉，達(dá)到畫龍點睛的目的。

要點用法

essential adj. 必要的

opposite to 與……相反

moderately adv. 適度地

entertainment n. 娛樂

decadent adj. 頹廢的

indispensable adj. 不可缺少的

句法點評

1. If people work without having fun, they will live under great pressure.

if引導(dǎo)條件狀語從句，under pressure表示“在壓力之下”。

2. They can’t relax their body and mind, which will affect their health.

which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句，修飾主句。

二、漫畫、圖表類