英語六級命題作文：假冒偽劣商品的危害
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- 結構剖析
- 參考譯文
- 亮點詞匯
- 重點句背誦與仿寫
Harm of Fake Commodities
One negative aspect of China's rapid economic development is the phenomenon of fake commodities. It is reported that these commodities range from foodstuff, clothes to radios, and TV sets and even medicines.
Fake commodities are harmful in many ways. They have caused great loss and damage to consumers as well as to the society. For example, if someone buys some fake medicines, they may not cure him but may probably make his illness worse or even put an end to his life. Besides, fake commodities may cause people to lose trust in manufacturers who produce the real products by making the consumers suspicious of these products, thus leading to social problems.
It is high time to take actions to get rid of fake commodities. First, the government should perfect relevant laws concerning the manufacture and sale of commodities. Second, people should be advised how to tell the genuine commodities from the fake ones, and be encouraged to report to the relevant authorities in case they have bought fake commodities. (169 words)
結構剖析
文章分為三段
第一段主要指出經濟的快速發(fā)展導致了一個弊端--假冒偽劣商品的產生，繼而指出假冒偽劣商品的猖狂。
第二段主要在于論述假冒偽劣商品對消費者和社會產生的危害，以買到假藥為例，說明了其嚴重性;而且市場上的假冒偽劣商品也會引發(fā)消費者對生產真正產品的廠家的不信任，繼而引發(fā)出社會問題。
第三段分兩個方面來論述作者認為可以采取的消除假冒偽劣商品的措施：第一，政府要加強對相關法規(guī)的建設;第二，要告訴消費者如何分別真?zhèn)尾⑶夜膭钏麄冊谫I到假冒偽劣商品時上報相關部門。
假冒偽劣商品的危害
中國經濟迅速發(fā)展產生的一個消極方面就是假冒偽劣商品的出現。據報道，從食品、服裝業(yè)到收音機和電視機甚至藥品都充斥著假冒偽劣商品。
假冒偽劣商品存在很多弊害。他們對消費者和社會都造成巨大的損失和傷害。例如，如果有人買了一些假藥，它可能不但無法治愈他反而使他的病情惡化，甚至使他的生命走向終結。此外，假冒商品還可能使得消費者對這些產品產生懷疑，從而導致人們對生產真正產品的生產商失去信任，繼而引發(fā)社會問題。
現在是時候采取行動來消除假冒偽劣商品了。首先，政府應完善與商品的生產和銷售有關的法律。第二，應該告知人們如何分辨假冒偽劣商品，并鼓勵人們在購買到假冒偽劣商品時上報到相關部門。
negative adj. 否定的，消極的
phenomenon n. 現象
range from 從......到......范圍
put an end to 結束; 終止
manufacturer n. 制造商
(be) suspicious of 懷疑
relevant adj. 有關的
concerning prep. 關于
genuine adj. 真正的， 誠懇的
1. One negative aspect of China's rapid economic development is the phenomenon of fake commodities. 中國經濟迅速發(fā)展產生的一個消極方面就是假冒偽劣商品的出現。
2. Fake commodities are harmful in many ways. They have caused great loss and damage to consumers as well as to the society. 假冒偽劣商品存在很多弊害。他們對消費者和社會都造成巨大的損失和傷害。
3. Fake commodities may cause people to lose trust in manufacturers who produce the real products by making the consumers suspicious of these products, thus leading to social problems. 假冒商品還可能使得消費者對這些產品產生懷疑，從而導致人們對生產真正產品的生產商失去信任，繼而引發(fā)社會問題。
4. It is high time to take actions to get rid of fake commodities. 現在是時候采取行動來消除假冒偽劣商品了。
