On Online Chatting
With the development of IT, online chatting is becoming increasingly popular with many people.
However, people's opinions about it vary from person to person. Some think that it has more problems than benefits. First, it is a waste of time, energy and money as it doesn't produce any useful information and products. Second, it is misleading to its users because cyberspace is actually an imaginary space where things are unreal or fictional.
But the advocates of online chatting support it because it is another way of recreation which is both exciting and relaxing. Besides, it helps them release their emotions and worries freely and safely. To them, it is very useful and wonderful.
As far as I am concerned, whether online chatting is good or bad depends on the person who does it. So long as we can keep ourselves under good control, we can use it scientifically and properly and curb its bad effects to the greatest extent. (159 words)
結(jié)構(gòu)剖析
文章分為四段
第一段首句引出話題，提出網(wǎng)上聊天越來(lái)越流行的這種現(xiàn)象。
第二段用however轉(zhuǎn)折，指出人們對(duì)這種現(xiàn)象的看法不一致，接著指出反對(duì)的觀點(diǎn)，用first和second列出兩點(diǎn)反對(duì)的理由。
第三段用but轉(zhuǎn)折，指出支持者的觀點(diǎn)，并用because說(shuō)明理由，接著用besides闡明另一個(gè)支持的理由。
第四段用as far as I am concerned指出作者自己的觀點(diǎn)，最后用so long as引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句總結(jié)全文。
網(wǎng)上聊天
隨著信息技術(shù)行業(yè)的發(fā)展，網(wǎng)上聊天日益變得流行起來(lái)。
然而，每個(gè)人對(duì)此所持觀點(diǎn)都不同。有些人認(rèn)為它所帶來(lái)的問(wèn)題多于它所產(chǎn)生的利益。首先，網(wǎng)上聊天浪費(fèi)時(shí)間、能源和錢(qián)財(cái)，因?yàn)樗⒉荒軇?chuàng)造出任何有用的信息與產(chǎn)品。其次，它誤導(dǎo)了用戶，因?yàn)榫W(wǎng)絡(luò)空間其實(shí)是一個(gè)想象的空間，在那兒事物都是不真實(shí)的或虛構(gòu)的。
但網(wǎng)上聊天的擁護(hù)者們支持它是因?yàn)檫@是一種既刺激又放松的娛樂(lè)方式。此外，它有助于人們肆意地、安全地釋放他們的情感和憂慮。對(duì)他們而言，這非常有用，十分美妙。
我認(rèn)為，上網(wǎng)聊天的利弊取決于網(wǎng)絡(luò)用戶。只要我們能很好地控制自己，就能科學(xué)、合理地使用網(wǎng)絡(luò)，最大限度地遏制其消極影響。
increasingly adv. 漸增地
vary v. 變化
a waste of... 浪費(fèi)......
misleading adj. 引入歧途的
cyberspace n. 網(wǎng)絡(luò)空間
imaginary space 虛構(gòu)的空間
fictional adj. 虛幻的，虛構(gòu)的
advocate n. 支持者
recreation n. 娛樂(lè)，消遣
release v. 釋放
so long as 只要
curb v. 控制
to the greatest extent 最大限度
1. With the development of IT, online chatting is becoming increasingly popular with many people. 隨著信息技術(shù)行業(yè)的發(fā)展，網(wǎng)上聊天日益變得流行起來(lái)。
2. It is misleading to its users because cyberspace is actually an imaginary space where things are unreal or fictional. 它誤導(dǎo)了用戶，因?yàn)榫W(wǎng)絡(luò)空間其實(shí)是一個(gè)想象的空間，在那兒事物都是不真實(shí)的或虛構(gòu)的。
3. But the advocates of online chatting support it because it is another way of recreation which is both exciting and relaxing. 但網(wǎng)上聊天的擁護(hù)者們支持它是因?yàn)檫@是一種既刺激又放松的娛樂(lè)方式。
