Opening Psychological Courses
1. 許多人建議大學(xué)開(kāi)設(shè)心理課程
2. 我對(duì)這一問(wèn)題的看法
作文范文：
Recently more and more educator and commoncitizens suggest that universities colleges open morecourses which are helpful for students'psychological health. Personally, I fully agree withtheir proposal for the following reasons.
On the one hand, the ever-increasing pressureof study at the moment and job-hunting in the future may lead to many psychologicalproblems such as anxiety, depression and even despair, and the psychological coursesopen a door for communication and relaxation. On the other hand, such courses can teachstudents how to regulate feelings and emotions under different situations, which is a goodpreparation for the future life in the complex social network. Finally, these courses alsointroduce good habits which are conducive to mental and psychological health. To bemature and qualified citizens in the society, students have to do more than study hard.
In a word, I warmly welcome the establishment of psychological courses in universities. Inmy mind, they are good for students' psychological development.
點(diǎn)評(píng)：
首段提出主題，其中第二句為過(guò)渡句，引出下文;第二段提出三點(diǎn)同意的理由;最后一段得出結(jié)論，與第一段首句呼應(yīng)，其中第二句是解釋型的補(bǔ)充說(shuō)明句。
范文首段提出許多人建議大學(xué)開(kāi)設(shè)心理課程。作者同意這一建議，并分三點(diǎn)在第二段中敘述理由。首先，目前的學(xué)習(xí)以及將來(lái)的就業(yè)壓力需要開(kāi)設(shè)心理課程。其次，教會(huì)學(xué)生如何調(diào)整在不同環(huán)境下的情緒。最后，給學(xué)生介紹有利于其身心健康的好習(xí)慣。第三段總結(jié)呼應(yīng)首段內(nèi)容。
第二段第一點(diǎn)中的ever-increasing表示“一直在增加的”，修飾兩個(gè)名詞詞組，對(duì)比鮮明，at themoment表示“現(xiàn)在”，in the future表示“將來(lái)”，open a door for…表示“開(kāi)啟了……之門”;第二點(diǎn)中的regulate表示“調(diào)節(jié)，控制”;第三點(diǎn)中的conducive表示“有益于……的”，后接介詞to。
