題型一：引語評論作文 2012年12月17日CET-4 作文真題
Part Ⅰ Writing (30 minutes) Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong Will by commenting on the humorous saying, “Quitting smoking is the easiest thing in the world. I’ve done it hundreds of times。” You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words。
2012年12月17日CET-4 作文真題
Part I Writing (30 minutes) Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled The Way to Success by commenting on Abraham Lincoln’s famous remark, “Give me six hours to chop down a tree, and I will spend the first four sharpening the axe。” You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。
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Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong There is an old saying: where there is a will, there is a way. It tells us that a strong will is the most essential quality that anyone who wants to achieve success. It can contribute a lot to one’s success。
Although “All roads lead to Rome”， none of them is completely smooth. Our life is filled with obstacles which may make us feel so hopeless that we may choose to give up. At the crucial moment, strong will helps a lot. As a matter of fact, the ability to work through difficult situation and unfortunate events with strong will can make one stronger and more capable. In other words, if we want to realize life’s goal, we must keep forging ahead with strong consciousness。
From what has been discussed above, we can see that the establishment of tough determination is of great importance to everyone. With a strong will, including our knowledge, we will be able to deal with any situation in our life. Whatever we do, as long as we stick to and do not give up easily, we will realize the goal at last。
The Way to Success
"Genius is one percent inspiration and ninety-nine percent perspiration." And here comes our question, what is the way to success? A strong will and great efforts are the most essential two keys to the door of success。
Why do people fail to achieve their goal? The reason is that most of them give up halfway due to their lack of a strong will once they encounter any difficulty. A man of a strong will always sticks to his cause no matter how tough it might be. Would Thomas Edison be such a great man in history if he had done nothing but possessing a strong will? We are all familiar with his story that he had tried one thousand kinds of materials before he finally made his great bulb light up. Without hard effort, Edison might have been a nobody. Without efforts, no one can succeed. To sum up, a strong will and great efforts can help one open up the way to success. Where there is a will with efforts, there is a way。
萬能文章結(jié)構(gòu)與思路
第1段：引語引用+簡單評論段
1文章第一句話：直接引用引語
1.1.第一句的第一種寫法： 名人名言
○1“ 。”Sb. once said. ○
2 Sb. once said，“ 。”
○3 I assume that you are familiar with the words of sb. , who once said, “ 。” 我想你應(yīng)該熟悉sb。說過的一句話，他曾經(jīng)說過：“ 。”
1. 2第一句的第二種寫法： 俗語/常言/習(xí)語/成語/諺語
○1 As the commonly-heard saying/idiom/proverb goes，“ 。”
○2 I assume that you are familiar with saying, which is commonly-heard , “ 。” 我想你應(yīng)該熟悉一句耳熟能詳?shù)乃渍Z/常言習(xí)語/諺語，是這么說的：“ 。”
2文章第二句話：簡化引語+表層評論
2.1用自己的語言說明、解釋抽象和凝練的引語，保持原意的同時(shí)，使之簡潔易懂; 本句根據(jù)題目引語內(nèi)容，自由發(fā)揮
2.2對引語的表層含義進(jìn)行評論：就引語的“事”說“事”，不要上升到人生哲理高度 It is obvious that …
文章第二句話寫法真題舉例： (1.2.1)Although four-hour seems to be quite a long time, it can help people chop down the tree more smoothly and less laboriously in the rest two hours. (1.2.2) It is obvious that a full preparation can help people enhance the efficiency of trees-chopping. [2011-12月CET6]
(1.2.1)Quitting smoking is so easy as long as you keep away from cigarettes. However, many people can hardly resist the temptation of cigarette and then give up their attempt to quit smoking. (1.2.2) It is obvious that no one can quit smoking with ease without strong will and determination. [2011-12月CET4]
第2段：意義闡述段
3. 文章第三句話：由表及里，提煉挖掘引語的深層含義
3.1 The saying/proverb/ sb’s remark aims at informing us of the significance of A。
3.2 Simple as the sentence may sound, it contains abundant life philosophy and informs us of the significance of A。
4. 文章第四句話： 強(qiáng)調(diào)A的重要性
4.1 There is no denying that we can not emphasize the importance of A too much。
4.2 why does A. play an indispensable role in our life/ work/ pursuit of success ?
5. 文章第五句話： 論述A的重要性
5.1 A will enable us to achieve our objectives more smoothly and realize their dreams more rapidly. The more Communicative/Modest/ Honest /Cooperative/ Inclusive we are, the more likely we are to build harmonious relationships and master more resources which is advantageous to their success。
兩個(gè)衍生體：action & plan
Action will enable us to achieve our objectives more smoothly and realize their dreams more rapidly. The more action we take, the more likely we are to accumulate experience, master skills and get close to our destination。
Making plan will enable us to achieve our objectives more smoothly and realize their dreams more rapidly. The more detailed plan we make , the more likely we are to make full use of time, enhance our work efficiency make full preparation for unexpected cases/
5.2 A is crucial for every individual. With its seemingly magic power, A can not only better accelerate individuals' development, but serve as an efficient instrument for individuals to change the world. [The consciousness of innovation/ Confidence/ Dream / Objective / Diligence]
5.3 Those who possess A are always admired and respected, because A may endow them with more competence, chances, self-confidence to overcome difficulties and approach challenges. Those people appear to possess a special charm, bringing to others hope, passion and surprise, and, thus winning others' favor and trust. [A strong will/ Persistence/ Perseverance/Optimism /Ppassion/ Enthusiasm/ Hope / Courage / Patience ]
6. 文章第六句話：舉例論述A的重要性
6.1 Quite a few examples can be given to prove the importance of A. However, I can think of no better illustration than the following one:
6.2 To further demonstrate the importance of A, I would like to take sb. as a case in point。
舉例公式： Sb. ,插入語， how could he/she do sth. without A ?
第三段：結(jié)合實(shí)際
7. 文章第七句話：銘記A的重要性
7.1 In view of the importance of A, we should always keep firmly/bear in mind that A will exert a profound influence on our life/work/health/personality。
7.2 From my perspective, at no time should we ignore the importance of A。
8. 文章第八句話：采取具體行動(dòng)，踐行A的重要精神
8.1 Accordingly，we should foster the consciousness of A by doing sth. Develop the habit of A in our work/daily life。
8.2 在日常生活/工作中，運(yùn)用A來解決問題
Hence, what we must do is to to carry out a full investigation, set up a proper goal and draw up a detailed plan before we take actions. [2011-12月CET6]
Hence, when confronted with difficulties and setbacks, we need to grit our teeth and stick to the belief/faith that where there is a will, there is a way. [2011-12月CET4]
9. 文章第九句話： 名人名言，呼應(yīng)主題
“ 。”Sb. also once said。
常用名言警句：
1. Living without an aim is like sailing without an aim. Alexander Dumas (Davy de La Pailleterie, French Writer) 生活沒有目標(biāo)就像航海沒有指南針. (法國作家大仲馬. A。)
2. Genius only means hard-working all one’s life. ( Mendeleyer, Russian Chemist) 天才只意味著終身不懈的努力. (俄國化學(xué)家門捷列耶夫)
3. patience is bitter, but its fruit is sweet. (Jean Jacques Rousseau , French thinker) 忍耐是痛苦的，但它的果實(shí)是甜蜜的. (法國思想家盧梭. J. J。)
4. I am a slow walker, but I never walk backwards. (Abraham Lincoln , American president)
我走得慢，但我從不后退(美國總統(tǒng)林肯. A。)
5. Only those who have the patience to do simple things perfectly ever acquire the skill to do difficult things easily. (Friedrich Schiller, German Dramatist and poet). 只有有耐心圓滿完成簡單工作的人， 才能夠輕而易舉地完成困難的事. (德國劇作家， 詩人席勒. F。)
6. You have to believe in yourself. That’s the secret of success. (Charles Chaplin , American actor ) 人你必須要對自己有信心，那是成功的秘訣(美國演員卓別林. C。)
7. Happiness lies not in the mere possession of money; it lies in the joy of achievement, in the thrill of creative effort. (Franklin Roosevelt , American president ) 成功不僅僅在于擁有錢，還在于成就帶來的喜悅，和努力帶來的興奮(美國總統(tǒng)羅斯福. F。)
8. None of us is as smart as all of us. Winston Churchill 三個(gè)臭皮匠，頂個(gè)諸葛亮~丘吉爾
