「考研滿分作文」建議信：建議老師改進教學
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Dear Professor Whitman,
Last week you asked us to give you feedback on your lectures. My thoughts are outlined below.
In general, I find your lectures very informative and inspiring. Indeed, I particularly like the way you demonstrate complex issues-using simple PPTs. This makes your lessons both interesting and memorable. However, I do feel that you should provide us with more handouts, as I often don't have time to take down all the important points. I would also like to be involved in more class discussions, as I find that this method could deepen my understanding of the subject.
I'd like to thank you for your attention given to us. I look forward to your next lecture.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
尊敬的惠特曼教授：
上周您讓我們對您的課進行反饋。我的想法概括如下：
總的來說，我發(fā)現(xiàn)您的課既可以增進知識，又頗具啟發(fā)性。實際上，我特別喜歡您用簡單的PPT來說明復雜問題的方式。這使得您的課既有趣又令人印象深刻。不過，因為我經(jīng)常沒時間記下所有的要點，我確實覺得您應該提供給我們更多的講義。我還想?yún)⑴c更多的課堂討論，因為我發(fā)現(xiàn)課堂討論可以加深我對這門課的理解。
我想感謝您對我們的關(guān)注。期待您下次上課。
您真誠的，
李明
道長點評
建議信的首段應表明寫作意圖，并簡要介紹自己;要注意語氣，切勿啰唆。次段應針對某情況提出具體建議或忠告，應先肯定優(yōu)點，再寫需要改進之處，否則對方以為是投訴而非建議。末段應總結(jié)建議，注意禮貌。寫信時應時刻考慮收信人的感受。
feedback 反饋
lecture 講課
thought 想法
outline 概述
informative 增進知識的
inspiring 啟發(fā)靈感的
demonstrate 說明
complex 復雜的
issue 問題
memorable 容易記住的
handout 講義，材料
discussion 討論
deepen 加深
understanding 理解
subject 課程
1 I am writing this letter to propose some pertinent recommendations to you in regard to your teaching.
我寫這封信是想對您的教學工作提出一些相關(guān)建議。
2 I hope you will find these proposals useful/practical.
我希望您會發(fā)現(xiàn)這些建議有用/很實用。
3 I trust you will take my suggestions into account.
我相信您會考慮我的建議。
4 You have asked me for my advice with regard to your teaching, and I will try to make some constructive suggestions.
您問我對您的教學工作有什么建議，我會試著給出一些建設性的意見。
5 I would be more than happy to see improvements in this regard.
我會很樂意看到這方面有所改進。
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