雅思寫作優(yōu)質(zhì)范文：育兒課程的重要性
Parenting is perhaps the greatest responsibility of our life and mistakes and wrong decisions can ruin a family as well as the future of a child. Since many young people become parents and the number of nuclear families is on the rise, many experts emphasize the importance of parenting courses for both fathers and mothers. I personally agree with this notion as I believe that such sessions would be immensely helpful.
為人父母也許是我們一生中最大的責(zé)任，錯(cuò)誤的決定可能會(huì)毀掉一個(gè)家庭和孩子的未來(lái)。由于許多年輕人成為父母，核心家庭的數(shù)量也在增加，許多專家強(qiáng)調(diào)了育兒課程對(duì)父親和母親的重要性。我個(gè)人同意這一觀點(diǎn)，因?yàn)槲蚁嘈胚@樣的課程將大有幫助。
To begin with, proper parenting requires a great deal of knowledge and dedication. Sometimes minor negligence and lack of knowledge can lead to catastrophic outcomes. For instance, if busy parents forget to vaccinate a newborn, that would jeopardize the offspring’s life. Similarly, many parents, especially from the countryside, have silly superstitions that influence them to make bad choices. If those parents attend a course where experts share their opinions on different aspects of child fostering and right parenting, they would be highly benefitted. For example, my cousin Paula, who became a mother a few months ago believed that her child had a problem with digestion and need medical attention. However, it was revealed that the way she fed her daughter was not correct. I believe that a suitable course that brings out different aspects of upbringing a child, both moral and practical aspects, would save many unexpected situations for newly become parents.
首先，正確的育兒方式需要大量的知識(shí)和奉獻(xiàn)精神。有時(shí)，輕微的疏忽和知識(shí)的缺乏會(huì)導(dǎo)致災(zāi)難性的結(jié)果。例如，如果忙碌的父母忘記給新生兒接種疫苗，這將危及后代的生命。同樣，許多父母，尤其是來(lái)自農(nóng)村的父母，也有愚蠢的迷信，影響他們做出錯(cuò)誤的選擇。如果這些父母參加一個(gè)專家分享他們對(duì)兒童養(yǎng)育和正確育兒不同方面意見的課程，他們將受益匪淺。例如，我的堂姐寶拉幾個(gè)月前成為了一名母親，她認(rèn)為她的孩子有消化問(wèn)題，需要醫(yī)療護(hù)理。然而，據(jù)透露，她喂養(yǎng)女兒的方式并不正確。我相信，一門合適的課程，從道德和實(shí)踐兩個(gè)方面展示孩子成長(zhǎng)的不同方面，會(huì)為新成為父母的人省去許多意想不到的情況。
Moreover, the increasing trends of single parents and nuclear family lack the expert opinion of the grandparents, unlike the past. This is why the need for such parenting sessions has risen even more. Such sessions bring parents together, let them share their views, forms a social relationship and help people learn the real facts about their personal prejudices. This is a great way to educate to-be-parents and newly-become-parents learn more about practical aspects of parenting and in a broader sense make a better society.
此外，與過(guò)去不同，單親父母和核心家庭的增長(zhǎng)趨勢(shì)缺乏祖父母的專家意見。這就是為什么對(duì)此類育兒課程的需求進(jìn)一步增加的原因。這樣的課程將父母聚集在一起，讓他們分享自己的觀點(diǎn)，形成社會(huì)關(guān)系，并幫助人們了解關(guān)于他們個(gè)人偏見的真實(shí)事實(shí)。這是一個(gè)很好的方式，可以教育成為父母的人，讓新成為父母的人們更多地了解育兒的實(shí)際方面，并在更廣泛的意義上創(chuàng)造一個(gè)更好的社會(huì)。
To conclude, being informed and educated parents is an important aspect to become good parents. Since parenting courses help people in a diverse way, it is indeed a good idea for people to participate in such courses.
總之，了解情況并接受教育是成為好父母的一個(gè)重要方面。由于育兒課程以多種方式幫助人們，因此人們參加此類課程確實(shí)是個(gè)好主意。
總之，了解情況并接受教育是成為好父母的一個(gè)重要方面。由于育兒課程以多種方式幫助人們，因此人們參加此類課程確實(shí)是個(gè)好主意。
