英語修辭與寫作·20.2　說明

20.2　說明

20.2A　說明段落的結(jié)構(gòu)特點

1） 說明可能是最基本、最常用的文體，用于說明事實、情況和傳遞信息等。人們進(jìn)行說明時，通常都是通過例子使自己的說明具體化，因而可以概括出這樣一個格式：

Generalization+Illustration（s）

下面是Eric Hoffer所寫的一段說明文：

The undercurrent of admiration in hatred manifests itself in the inclination to imitate those we hate. Thus every mass movement shapes itself after its specific devil. Christianity at its height realized the image of the antichrist. The Jacobins practiced all the evils of the tyranny they had risen against ... Russia is realizing the purest and most colossal example of monopolistic capitalism. Hitler took the Protocols of the Wise Men of Zion for his guide and textbook; he followed them “down to the veriest detail.”

（The True Believer）

段中的前兩句為Generalization部分，后面為Illustrations部分。在Generalization的兩句中，還可以進(jìn)一步劃分Subject或Topic Sentence（主題句）加Restriction，即對主題句加以必要的說明、限定，也有時不加Restriction而只用主題（句）。在Illustration部分可以用幾個例子，也可以只用一個例子，視具體情況而定。有的段落還可能再加上一個結(jié)尾（Conclusion），同開頭的主題（句）相呼應(yīng)。

2） 上面講到的“Subject+Restriction+Illustration（s）”的格式，其中的次序也可倒過來，前者稱為“演繹法”（Deductive Method），后者叫做“歸納法”（Inductive Method）。下面是一個“歸納法”的段落：

Under a canopy of hickory and oak trees file people of all ages and sizes, some neatly dressed in street clothes formal enough for lunch at the Tavern, others in sloppy jeans and fringed jackets, with huge, floppy, handcrafted leather hats on their heads, and here and there, some older women in the long gingham dresses and sunbonnets characteristic of the Appalachian farm wife. They file past booths topped with red, yellow, and blue-striped canvas and filled with the handicrafts traditional to this fair: thin, beautifully polished wooden trays, brightly colored enamelware, rainbows of cornstalk flowers, and macramé wall hangings sharing the limbs of trees with sandcastle candles. Near the gate the loud clatter of a corn-meal grinder can be heard, interspersed in the quiet pauses between customers with the plucking of dulcimer strings and the soft crooning of mountain singers. This Mardi Gras scene, greeting the newcomer to the Berea Arts and Crafts Fair, is an annual rite of spring. This gentle orgy, one of several in the area, is a reaffirmation that traditional craftsmanship is alive and well and still flourishes in Appalachia.

（Michael E. Adelstein & Jean G. Pival）

2） 除了舉例說明外，還可以使用過程說明、比較對比說明、因果關(guān)系說明、分類說明、定義說明等。讓我們在以下各節(jié)中分別加以討論。

20.2B　過程分析

過程分析（Process analysis）是按事物進(jìn)展的先后次序進(jìn)行說明，包括時間順序、位置指引、操作程序等。

1）按時間順序（Temporal Order / Chronological Sequence） 說明。例如：

This time it happened to Sonny, and in the very first minutes of play. Leroy Malone managed to trip the gangly Paducah center and while the center was sprawled on the floor Sonny ran right along his back, in pursuit of the ball. Just as he was about to grab it somebody tripped him and he hit the wall head first. The next thing he knew he was stretched out beside the bench and one of the freshmen players was squeezing a wet washrag on his fore-head. Sonny tried to keep his eyes closed as long as he could — he new Coach Popper would send him back into the game as soon as he regained consciousness. He feigned deep coma for about five minutes, but unfortunately the coach was experienced in such matters. He came over and lifted one of Sonny's eyelids and saw that he was awake.

（Larry McMurtry）

關(guān)于因果關(guān)系說明，參見19.2B4。

2） 位置指引（Locational instructions），常見于對問路人的回答或告訴某人具體地點。以下面一段對話為例：

Locksmith: I'm Jack Jones from National Lock and Key Company. I'm supposed to change a lock on Ms. Grady's desk.

Receptionist: Yes, I've been expecting you. Ms. Grady's office is on the third floor, Office 301. You'll notice identifying numbers over the door. After you enter the office, go to the desk on the left. As you face the desk, the drawer on the right is the one that needs to have the lock replaced.

3） 操作程序說明（Operational instructions）中常用祈使句，其中第二人稱作為主語往往省略。例如：

First, （you） unplug the appliance. Use the fingers to turn it counterclockwise until it can be removed. Then with a Phillips screwdriver carefully remove the back plate.

（N. A. Pickett & A. A. Laster）

對于比較復(fù)雜的操作程序，有時可分為“Step 1, Step 2, ...”逐步說明，最后還可視情況需要附上Precautions或Warnings等內(nèi)容，以保證操作順利進(jìn)行。

20.2C　比較和對照

1） 比較和對照（Comparison and Contrast）是就兩個對象之間的相同點和不同點 （Similarities and Differences） 進(jìn)行說明。這里是評論家 Matthew Arnold針對Robert Burns和Geoffrey Chaucer兩位詩人所寫的一個段落，結(jié)尾為該段落的主題句：

Yet we may say of [Burns] as of Chaucer, that of life and the world, as they come before him, his view is large, free, shrewd, benignant-truly poetic, therefore; and his manner of rendering what he sees is to match. But we must note, at the same time, his great difference from Chaucer. The freedom of Chaucer is heightened, in Burns, by a fiery, reckless energy; the benignity of Chaucer deepens, in Burns, into an overwhelming sense of the pathos of things; — of the pathos of human nature, the pathos, also, of non-human nature. Instead of the fluidity of Chaucer's manner, the manner of Burns has spring, bounding swiftness. Burns is by far the greater force, though he has perhaps less charm.

2） 有時專門就兩個對象之間的不同點加以對照，例如下面一個段落：其中第一句為該段的主題句，然后是從幾個方面說明父親和母親之間的不同之處，最后兩句為全段小結(jié)，同句首相呼應(yīng)。

Opposites seem to attract. My father is tall, blond, and outgoing. My mother is small, and even her dark brown hair, which is naturally wavy, has a certain quiet repose about it. My dad does everything at a cheerful run, whether he is off to a sales conference or off to the golf course with his foursome on Saturday mornings. My mother never seems to hurry. She hums at her work, and the house seems to slip into order without effort. She plays bridge with a few friends, and belongs to a number of organizations, but she is just as happy with a book. When dad bursts in at the end of the day, her face lights up. They grin at each other. They obviously still find each other attractive.

（Sheridan Baker）

3） 在對兩個對象的相同/相似點加以比較時，往往采用“類比”（Analogy）的形式 （參見9.1），或者說是一個擴(kuò)展的“隱喻” （Metaphor, 參見8.2）。下面是E. B. White對Thoreau的Walden的一段分析：開頭一句（主題句）就是一個類比，然后分兩個層次加以擴(kuò)展（... he rides into the subject at top speed ... and when the shooting dies down ...）。

Thoreau's assault on the Concord society of the mid-nineteenth century has the quality of a modern Western: he rides into the subject at top speed, shooting in all directions. Many of his shots ricochet and nick him on the rebound, and throughout the melee there is a horrendous cloud of inconsistencies and contradictions, and when the shooting dies down and the air clears, one is impressed chiefly by the courage of the rider and by how splendid it was that somebody should have ridden in there and raised all that ruckus.

（E. B. White: A Slight Sound at Evening）

20.2D　分類和定義

1） 客觀事物常?？梢园凑杖藗兊牧?xí)慣加以分類（Classifications）, 如大學(xué)生分成freshman, sophomore, junior, senior; 法律界分為legislative, executive, judicial; 交通分land, air and water communications，等等，而且還可以進(jìn)一步劃分為subclasses。下面是一段以分類法說明巴拿馬運河涉及的問題的文章：

Building the Panama Canal posed problems of politics, geology, and human survival from the beginning. A French company, organized in 1880 to dig the canal, repeatedly had to extend its treaties at higher and higher prices as the work dragged on. Uneasy about the French, the United States made treaties with Nicaragua and Costa Rica to dig along the other most feasible route. This political threat, together with the failure of the French and the revolt of Panama from Colombia, finally enabled the United States to buy the French rights and negotiate new treaties, which, nevertheless, continue to cause political trouble to this day. Geology also posed its ancient problems: how to manage torrential rivers and inland lakes; whether to build a longer but more enduring canal at sea level, or a shorter, cheaper, and safer canal with locks. Economy eventually won, but the problem of yellow fever and malaria, which had plagued the French, remained. By detecting and combating the fever-carrying mosquito, William Gorgas solved these ancient topical problems. Without him, the political and geological solutions would have come to nothing.

（Sheridan Baker）

2） 為了說明問題，常常需要對一些詞語——尤其是那些抽象的、技術(shù)性的關(guān)鍵詞語下定義。定義的方式主要有：

同義釋義（Defining by Synonym），如：

Apathetic means “indifferent”. （Not “indifference”。）

Prevaricate means “lie.” （Not “lying”.）

舉例釋義（Defining by Example），如：

A planet is a heavenly sphere such as Jupiter, Mercury, Mars, or Earth.

詞根釋義（Defining by Etymology），如：

Intuition comes from the Latin words “in” （meaning “in” or “into”）and “tueri”, （meaning “look” or “gaze”）. Literally, therefore, it means a “looking inward”.

比較、對照或類比釋義（Defining by Comparison, Contrast, or Analogy），如：

While burglary is the stealing of property from a place, robbery is the stealing of property from a person.

功能釋義 （Defining by Function）, 如：

An orthopedist treats bone diseases.

An ombudsman defends an individual in a conflict with the government or an institution.

反義釋義 （Defining by Negation）, 如：

A widow refers to a woman whose husband is not living and who has not married.

“反義釋義”法可以擴(kuò)展為段落，其方法可以歸納為四步推理法： a. what it is not like; b. what it is like; c. what it is not; d. what it is.例如：

Love may be many things to many people, but, all in all, we agree on its essentials. Love is not like a rummage sale, in which everyone tries to grab what he wants. It is more like a Christmas, in which gifts and thoughtfulness come just a little unexpectedly, even from routine directions. Love, in short, is not a matter of seeking self-satisfaction; it is first a matter of giving and then discovering, as an unexpected gift, the deepest satisfaction one can know.

上述4個步驟還可以擴(kuò)展為4個段落。這4個步驟也可以反過來，以逆序形式構(gòu)成釋義段落。例如：

Black Power means, for example, that in Lowndes County, Alabama, a black sheriff can end police brutality. A black tax assessor and tax collector and county board of revenue can lay, collect, and channel tax monies for the building of better roads and schools serving black people. In such areas as Lowndes, where black people have a majority, they will attempt to use power to exercise control. This is what they seek: control. When black people lack a majority, Black Power means proper representation and sharing of control. It means the creation of power bases, of strength, from which black people can press to change local or nation-wide patterns of oppression — instead of from weakness.

It does not mean merely putting black faces into office. Black visibility is not Black Power. Most of the black politicians around the country today are not examples of Black Power. The power must be that of a community, and emanate from there. The black politicians must start from there. The black politicians must stop being representatives of “downtown”machines, whatever the cost might be in terms of patronage and holiday handouts.

（Stokely Carmichael and Charles V. Hamilton: Black Power, the Politics of Liberation in America）

練習(xí)二十?。‥xercise Twenty）

I. Preview Questions:

1. What do you think of the statement that each paragraph must have a clear center of thought?

2. What does one mean when he says that a certain paragraph needs further development?

3. What are the basic types of writing?

4. Which of the four basic types of writing is used most frequently in your life?

5. Do you think that Exposition usually follows the pattern of “Generalization plus Illustration”?

6. Do you always use a topic sentence when you write an expository paragraph?

7. What are the three basic approaches people may use in “Process Analysis”?

8. What do you usually try to indicate when you resort to “Comparison and Contrast”?

9. How many ways can you make definitions?

10. Have you ever used the principle of “Defining by Negation” in a paragraph development?

II. Read the following paragraphs and analyse them as indicated:

1. Point out the topic sentence and the steps concerning having fresh shrimp in the following paragraph：

When fresh shrimp can be had, have it. What size? Medium for reasons of economy and common sense. Huge shrimps are magnificently expensive while small ones come in such numbers per pound that shelling them becomes slave labor. Buy two pounds of fresh shrimp and shell them. First, with a thumbnail pinch the tail shell hard crosswise （so the tail segments will come out intact）, then handle the headless animals like so many pea pods; split them lengthwise, save the contents, and throw the husks away. Sauté the shrimp with three crushed garlic cloves in two-thirds of a stick of butter. When the shrimp turn pink, add a 12-ounce can of Italian tomatoes （which taste better than the fresh supermarket kind）,two bay leaves, a teaspoon of dried oregano, a half-cup of dry white wine, and the juice of a lemon. Simmer for ten minutes, sprinkle with chopped parsley and serve with rice.

（Philip Kopper）

2. Identify the sentences that state the cause and effect in this paragraph:

On December 1, 1955, an attractive Negro seamstress, Mrs. Rosa Parks, boarded the Cleveland Avenue Bus in downtown Montgomery. She was returning home after her regular day's work in the Montgomery Fair — a leading department store. Tired from long hours on her feet,Mrs. Parks sat down in the first seat behind the section reserved for whites. Not long after she took her seat, the bus operator ordered her, along with three other Negro passengers, to move back in order to accommodate boarding white passengers. By this time every seat in the bus was taken. This meant that if Mrs. Parks followed the driver's command she would have to stand while a white male passenger, who had just boarded the bus, would sit. The other three Negro passengers immediately complied with the driver's request. But Mrs. Parks quietly refused. The result was her arrest.

3. Classification and division are very common because they offer the writer a convenient way to separate a complex idea or group of facts into simpler, more manageable units. Now read the paragraph and tell how the writer classifies mothers of handicapped children according to categories marked by three attitudes:

Researchers note three frequent attitudes among mothers of handicapped children. The first attitude is reflected by those mothers who reject their child or are unable to accept the child as a handicapped person. Complex love-hate and acceptance-rejection relationships are found within this group. Rejected children not only have problems in adjusting to themselves and their disabilities, but they also have to contend with disturbed family relationships and emotional insecurity. Unfortunately, such children receive even less encouragement than the normal child and have to absorb more criticism of their behavior.

A second relationship involves mothers who overcompensate in their reactions to their child and the disorder. They tend to be unrealistic, rigid, and overprotective. Often, such parents try to compensate by being overzealous and giving continuous instruction and training in the hope of establishing superior ability.

The third group consists of mothers who accept their children along with their disorders. These mothers have gained the ability to provide for the special needs of their handicapped children while continuing to live a normal life and tending to family and home as well as civic and social obligations. The child's chances are best with parents who have accepted both their child and the defects.

（Janet W. Lerner）

4. Notice how the examples illustrate and clarify the topic sentences in the following paragraphs:

The American colonists used a variety of goods in place of money. These goods included beaver pelts, grain, musket balls, and nails. Some colonists, especially in the tobacco-growing colonies of Maryland and Virginia, circulated receipts for tobacco stored in warehouses. Indian wampum, which consisted of beads made from shells, was mainly used for keeping records.But Indians and colonists also accepted it as money.

The colonists also used any foreign coins they could get. English shillings, Spanish dollars, and French and Dutch coins all circulated in the colonies. Probably the most common coins were large silver Spanish dollars called pieces of eight. To make change, a person could chop the coin into eight pie-shaped pieces called bits. Two bits were worth a quarter of a dollar, four bits a half dollar, and so on. We still use the expression two bits to mean a quarter of a dollar.

（World Book Encyclopedia, 1982）

5. Read and tell how a formal definition is combined with classification, examples, and comparison and contrast:

A map is a conventional picture of an area of land, sea, or sky. Perhaps the maps most widely used are the road maps given away by the oil companies. They show the cultural features such as states, towns, parks, and roads, especially paved roads. They show also natural features, such as rivers and lakes, and sometimes mountains. As simple maps, most automobile drivers have on various occasions used sketches drawn by service station men, or by friends, to show the best automobile route from one town to another.

The distinction usually made between “maps” and “charts” is that a chart is a representation of an area consisting chiefly of water; a map represents an area that is predominantly land. It is easy to see how this distinction arose in the days when there was no navigation over land, but a truer distinction is that charts are specially designed for use in navigation, whether at sea or in the air.

Maps have been used since the earliest civilizations, and explorers find that they are used in rather simple civilizations at the present time by people who are accustomed to traveling. For example, Arctic explorers have obtained considerable help from maps of the coast lines showing settlements, drawn by Eskimo people. Occasionally maps show not only the roads, but pictures of other features. One of the earliest such maps dates from about 1400 B. C. It shows not only roads, but also lakes with fish, and a canal with crocodiles and a bridge over the canal. This is somewhat similar to the modern maps of a state which show for each large town some feature of interest or the chief products of that town.

（C. C. Wylie）

 

參考答案

EXERCISE TWENTY

Ⅱ.

1. Topic sentence When fresh shrimp can be had, have it.

Step 1: choose size What size? Medium for reasons of economy and common sense. Huge shrimps are magnificently expensive while small ones come in such numbers per pound that shelling them becomes slave labor.

Step 2: choose quantity Buy two pounds of fresh shrimp and shell them.

Step 3: shell shrimp First, with a thumbnail pinch the tail shell hard crosswise （so the tail segments will come out intact）, then handle the headless animals like so many pea pods; split them lengthwise,save the contents, and throw the husks away.

Step 4:cooking directions Sauté the shrimp with three crushed garlic cloves in two-thirds of a stick of butter. When the shrimp turn pink, add a 12-ounce can of Italian tomatoes （which taste better than the fresh supermarket kind）, two bay leaves, a teaspoon of dried oregano, a half-cup of dry white wine, and the juice of a lemon. Simmer for ten minutes, sprinkle with chopped parsley and serve with rice.

2. On December 1, 1955, an attractive Negro seamstress, Mrs. Rosa Parks, boarded the Cleveland Avenue Bus in downtown Montgomery. She was returning home after her regular day's work in the Montgomery Fair — a leading department store.

Incident 1

Incident 2

Incident 3 Tired from long hours on her feet, Mrs. Parks sat down in the first seat behind the section reserved for whites. Not long after she took her seat, the bus operator ordered her, along with three other Negro passengers, to move back in order to accommodate boarding white passengers. By this time every seat in the bus was taken. This meant that if Mrs. Parks followed the driver's command she would have to stand while a white male passenger, who had just boarded the bus, would sit.The other three Negro passengers immediately complied with the driver's request. But Mrs. Parks quietly refused. The result was her arrest.

3. Classification Researchers note three frequent attitudes among mother of handicapped children.

Category 1: rejection The first attitude is reflected by those mothers who reject their child or are unable to accept the child as a handicapped person. Complex love-hate and acceptance-rejection relationships are found within this group. Rejected children not only have problems in adjusting to themselves and their disabilities, but they also have to contend with disturbed family relationships and emotional insecurity. Unfortunately, such children receive even less encouragement than the normal child and have to absorb more criticism of their behavior.

Category 2: overcompensation A second relationship involves mothers who overcompensate in their reactions to their child and the disorder. They tend to be unrealistic, rigid, and overprotective. Often, such parents try to compensate by being overzealous and giving continuous instruction and training in the hope of establishing superior ability.

Category 3: acceptance The third group consists of mothers who accept their children along with their disorders. These mothers have gained the ability to provide for the special needs of their handicapped children while continuing to live a normal life and tending to family and home as well as civic and social obligations. The child's chances are best with parents who have accepted both their child and the defects.

4. Topic sentence

Examples

Example The American colonists used a variety of goods in place of money. These goods included beaver pelts, grain, musket balls, and nails . Some colonists, especially in the tobacco-growing colonies of Maryland and Virginia, circulated receipts for tobacco stored in warehouses. Indian wampum , which consisted of beads made from shells, was mainly used for keeping records. But Indians and colonists also accepted it as money.

Topic sentence

Examples

Example of Spanish dollars The colonists also used any foreign coins they could get. English shillings, Spanish dollars , and French and Dutch coins all circulated in the colonies. Probably the most common coins were large silver Spanish dollars called pieces of eight. To make change, a person could chop the coin into eight pie-shaped pieces called bits. Two bits were worth a quarter of a dollar, four bits a half dollar, and so on. We still use the expression two bits to mean a quarter of a dollar.

5. Formal definition

Classification:

area of land, sea, or sky A map is a conventional picture of an area of land, sea, or sky.

Example: road map Perhaps the maps most widely used are the road maps given away by the oil companies. They show the cultural features such as states, towns, parks, and roads, especially paved roads. They show also natural features, such as rivers and lakes, and sometimes mountains.

Example: simple maps As simple maps, most automobile drivers have on various occasions used sketches drawn by service station men, or by friends, to show the best automobile route from one town to another.

Contrast: Chart — represents water； map — represents land

Contrast:chart — for navigation The distinction usually made between “maps” and “charts” is that a chart is a representation of an area consisting chiefly of water； a map represents an area that is predominantly land. It is easy to see how this distinction arose in the days when there was no navigation over land, but a truer distinction is that charts are specially designed for use in navigation, whether at sea or in the air.

Example: use of maps

Example: features of some maps

Comparison: features of early maps with modem maps Maps have been used since the earliest civilizations, and explorers find that they are used in rather simple civilizations at the present time by people who are accustomed to traveling. For example, Arctic explorers have obtained considerable help from maps of the coast lines showing settlements, drawn by Eskimo people. Occasionally maps show not only the roads, but pictures of other features. One of the earliest such maps dates from about 1400 B.C. It shows not only roads, but also lakes with fish, and a canal with crocodiles and a bridge over the canal. This is somewhat similar to the modern maps of a state which show for each large town some feature of interest or the chief products of that town.